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Comment from Earl Corp
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Cool artwork, the bananas look good. Very cool poem. It rhymes, it makes sense, and it made me smile on a Monday morning, You can't get any better than that. I'll sign off now so you can get to the dentist. Very nice job.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    Thankth, Earl
Comment from Gloria ....
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Ha, yep nanners do hat theeds and now you know the hard way. Hope you get those syllables back.

Much enjoyed, Bill.

Gloria

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    Thank you, Gloria
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh, I hope this isn't autobiographical. Bananas definitely should not go crunch unless there's a bug or a tarantula. If it happened, I hope you got the right dental treatment quickly!

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
    Just a joke.
Comment from nomi338
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What the heck was it? Now you have got me scared to eat one of my favorite fruits. Was it a monkey seed? A banana nut? What? What? What? Only goes to prove that you gotta' be careful where you put your mouth. and what you put your mouth on.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
    Just joking. My dad used to warn me about banana pits when I was a child.
Comment from damommy
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Hahaha. Very cute. Darn those banana seeds. Need to watch out for them from now on. Must have been pretty tough ones to break those teeth.

You always such original ideas. I always enjoy your poems.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
    Thank you, da.
Comment from BeasPeas
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Super job in this amusing poem, Bill. I think you've created quite a stir with the banana bunch who may have this as a favorite fruit. I hope I don't chip a tooth. Marilyn

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
    Thanks, Marilyn.