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Comment from Earl Corp
Exceptional
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This is one of the few three line poems I like. It doesn't rhyme, but it makes sense, and it entertained me. The GIF you used is great and bumped you up to six stars.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    Thank you, Earl. for the kind and generous review. Bill
Comment from judiverse
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That sounds like something a dog would do. Some manage to keep a stone face and put on their innocent act. Eating toys doesn't sound like a good idea, though. Are you sure the kids are not doing these things and blaming the dog? Poor thing can't defend himself. Cute idea for your poem. judi

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
    Labs are indiscriminate eaters. My lab ate our wash clothes and underwear all the time. I?d find them later, shaped like a turd on the lawn.
reply by judiverse on 09-Dec-2018
    I didn't know that about labs. Maybe a different dog food would satisfy the dog. judi
Comment from nomi338
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I have never seen a face that appeared to be more guilty that that one. Of course I could be jumping to conclusions and maybe the poor pooch is innocent as a lamb. But he looks very guilty to me. Maybe you should water board him or something like that. See if you can get him to confess.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
    Guilt is known.
Comment from Sugarray77
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This is funny, Bill. When you cannot explain something,... blame the dog. Great job on this fun 5-7-5. Great presentation with the animation too. All the best,

Melissa

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
    Thanks, Melissa
Comment from BeasPeas
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Very cute. Count your blessings. He may eat the grandkids' toys and snacks but at least not the grandkids. Image is priceless. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2018
    Thanks, Marilyn