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A collection of poems showcasing unusual words

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Comment from Gracenoteme
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This poem leaves me feeling somewhat torn-on whether to venture forth, say out of my house for adventure, or not. I would prefer not, as I have been one to run my mouth at times. Also there seems to be a world at my fingertips, on my computer, and in my surroundings. I enjoy making my collages, practicing my piano and flute, and writing, especially poetry. Great use of the word Thule. I had not heard of it that I can remember.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
    Thanks for the kind review. While the poem was specifically about those who venture into parts unknown, I guess it could apply to a trip down the street. When there's plenty to occupy us at home, who needs to go out?
Comment from Gloria ....
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Yes, and at one period of time those soaring through the universes in the Starship Enterprise will be seen as ancient mariners.

Yes again, it's also good to get a "feel" for the land before running around shooting one's mouth off.

Great job, friend Craig.

Gloria

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
    Thanks very much, Gloria. Most appreciative of the continued support :) Craig
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Lol!!

Seems like very good advice. Unfortunately, there are way too many folks who believe they do not need to learn the customs and common ways. They charge in like the proverbial bull.

Great poem and a good word.

Patty

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
    Thanks so much, Patty, for the great comments. Cheers, Craig
Comment from lyenochka
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Nice pic of the Enterprise there. Appropriate for those "who boldly go" to Thule. Thanks for the info on the date when the South Pole was reached. And now they have a station there. Although we are amazed at feats like reaching Mars (with robots) but I'm still really impressed by explorers and travelers who crossed continents mostly on foot in ancient times.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
    I think both exhibit equal courage and daring, not to mention possibly a certain measure of foolhardiness. I'm referring to human space travel, not sending robots, that doesn't require much bravery. Thanks, Helen.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Love the word..has great 'ring' to it: Thoolee! Gonna make sure I find reasons to use it during the holidays! :) An enjoyable write here, Craig -- absolutely have to say I love the pic! :) :) Yvette

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
    Perhaps you could work into the conversation casually when you're on your Thule to visit Santa's workshop, Yvette? Many thanks, Craig :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your poem for this odd word, Craig. The picture is super. It sets the tone for what is to come. I like the sound advice you include for not running your mouth and leaving quickly if things turn sour. Your rhymes are great, the lines flow smoothly, and it was fun to read, too. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
    Thanks so much, Jan. I appreciate the kind comments, very much. Craig
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem/story it is not always wise to travel to places that are hardly known. We cannot for certain know what we will find there and may never return home.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
    Thanks very much, Sandra. My wanderlust has diminished notably over the years. These days, home is nearly always the best place to be. Cheers, Craig
Comment from Six-Star Writer
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The problem with people giving advice is that it's usually wrong or subjective, and they usually should keep their advice to themselves. I've had a much fuller, more well-rounded life than most people, but I usually don't dole out advice as people are so quick to do. And I don't ask or heed it unless absolutely necessary--usually when survival or some mandate forces me to listen to someone I don't want to listen to. I live by a simple rule in life: don't give advice unless it's asked for. And even then, don't give someone advice unless you know you're right. As Daniel Boone said, "Know you're right, then go ahead."

As far as their being strength in numbers, frankly, I'd rather have lots of weapons on hand--or at least always keep a rifle loaded--as I do at home. You can't always trust those "numbers" to do the right thing and have your back. But you can trust a rifle--as long as you keep it cleaned and oiled properly.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
    I've no time, or need, for a rifle, handgun, bow and arrow, baseball bat or slingshot. But, each to their own. Thanks for reviewing.
reply by Six-Star Writer on 14-Dec-2018
    Yeah, I have no need for a rifle either . . . that is until somebody breaks into my home . . . or some foreign power invades. I guess it's an American thing. Regarding the review, you're welcome.
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is an enjoyable write on your word of the day, "Thule." Image is super. Your poem tells us of two explorers who took their adventure to the limits of their world. Good rhyming, interesting, and fun. Marilyn

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
    Thanks so much, Marilyn.
Comment from Debbie Pope
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Well I learned a lot from this one, Craig. I am amazed at your knowledge of Greek history. I've studied Greek history and mythology, but I did not know (or have forgotten) Thule.
I also learned that it is time for me to stay home. Exciting journeys sound awful.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
    I'm with you 100%, Debbie. My wanderlust (along with most other lusts) have somewhat diminished as I've gotten older. Home is a great place to be. Many thanks :) Craig.