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Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a really cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned about the couch potatoes getting smashed and fried on the couch. I love davenport duo! lol Very good job. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Bill, This is a really cute 5-7-5 poem you have penned about the couch potatoes getting smashed and fried on the couch. I love davenport duo! lol Very good job. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 25-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2018
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Pamusart
Hi Bill. If you have potatoes which will make themselves into French fries and lie on my couch, I want some! Is a fat potato really fat? Big but not fat. Very clever little poem. I am trying to imagine the google search for that image. Maybe "two potatoes on a couch". Or "couch potatoes ". Which came first the image or the poem? Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Hi Bill. If you have potatoes which will make themselves into French fries and lie on my couch, I want some! Is a fat potato really fat? Big but not fat. Very clever little poem. I am trying to imagine the google search for that image. Maybe "two potatoes on a couch". Or "couch potatoes ". Which came first the image or the poem? Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 24-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Thanks, Pam. I actually randomly chose the subject ?potato? and searched for an image. When the pair on the couch appeared, I wrote the poem.
Comment from Earl Corp
How did you find a picture of two potatoes that looked like Beavis and Butthead. Getting smashed and fried on the couch also reminds me of them too. Nice job.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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How did you find a picture of two potatoes that looked like Beavis and Butthead. Getting smashed and fried on the couch also reminds me of them too. Nice job.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thanks, Earl, for giving this a look.
Comment from judiverse
This is clever. You could also call it a senyru. Great fun with smashed and fried. I like twice baked myself. Perfect closing line, "davenport duo." An excellent description of the two couch potato heads. I love the artwork, and the potatoes in it look liked they smashed and fried. judi
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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This is clever. You could also call it a senyru. Great fun with smashed and fried. I like twice baked myself. Perfect closing line, "davenport duo." An excellent description of the two couch potato heads. I love the artwork, and the potatoes in it look liked they smashed and fried. judi
Comment Written 23-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thanks, Judi
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from Miss Sherry
LOVE this - what a sense of humor!! Word play gives me the giggles! You really are a clever card and I hope to see more like this! Made my dull afternoon o f nose to grindstone worth while!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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LOVE this - what a sense of humor!! Word play gives me the giggles! You really are a clever card and I hope to see more like this! Made my dull afternoon o f nose to grindstone worth while!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thanks so much for the exceptional review, OP.
Comment from nomi338
From what I have learned from eavesdropping on some of todays young people, the couch is a very good place for smashing and getting smashed. The bed is still the best place, but as an alternative, the couch is not too bad. Oh wait, was that what you were talking about?
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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From what I have learned from eavesdropping on some of todays young people, the couch is a very good place for smashing and getting smashed. The bed is still the best place, but as an alternative, the couch is not too bad. Oh wait, was that what you were talking about?
Comment Written 23-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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I'm just talking about potatoes, nomi.
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Potatoes, potattos, tomatoes, tomattos. It's all the same to me.
Comment from damommy
Clever names and play on words. These must be the original couch potatoes. lol. Good alliteration with the davenport duo. Everyone used to say 'davenport.' No one does much anymore. Good to hear it again.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Clever names and play on words. These must be the original couch potatoes. lol. Good alliteration with the davenport duo. Everyone used to say 'davenport.' No one does much anymore. Good to hear it again.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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We'll be reading with specticals soon.
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I already do. lol
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahaha.
Okay, I get it.
In order to make this a 5-7-5 you had to use the word "sofa" instead of "couch".
However, in my humble opinion, you could have just as easily written:
Le' couch potatoes
get french fried on the sofa
davenport duo
Heh-heh-heh...
~Dean
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Hahaha.
Okay, I get it.
In order to make this a 5-7-5 you had to use the word "sofa" instead of "couch".
However, in my humble opinion, you could have just as easily written:
Le' couch potatoes
get french fried on the sofa
davenport duo
Heh-heh-heh...
~Dean
Comment Written 23-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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There might be soe potatapillars runnIngaround.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, now this is some wonderful potato humor first thing in the morning - think it's been forever since I've heard use of 'Davenport '! ;) Great 5 levin 5 (for levity not heavenly - lol!) - thanx for the wake up smile! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Oh, now this is some wonderful potato humor first thing in the morning - think it's been forever since I've heard use of 'Davenport '! ;) Great 5 levin 5 (for levity not heavenly - lol!) - thanx for the wake up smile! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 23-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thanks, Yvette.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A great play on words and I enjoyed your fun and unique write Bill, you are forever pulling out the stops with these off the wall and clever writes, Merry Christmas to you Bill, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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A great play on words and I enjoyed your fun and unique write Bill, you are forever pulling out the stops with these off the wall and clever writes, Merry Christmas to you Bill, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 23-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2018
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Thanks, Dolly