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Comment from Ms. Snyder
You crack me up! I came to visit your profile. Please don't ask me how. The title drew me in right away. I can be drawn into simplicity in all forms. I wish I had the six stars that this honorable poem deserves. But alas, it is Thursday and we both know what that means in Fan Story. I want you to know that I have had my share of instigative interaction with the lovely advanced editor. I think this particular poem and the wit that you have provided here: falls right into my lap, up my alley, and down my stream. Thank you for giving me a great belly laugh this afternoon. I appreciate when people offer these great visuals with their work! Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
You crack me up! I came to visit your profile. Please don't ask me how. The title drew me in right away. I can be drawn into simplicity in all forms. I wish I had the six stars that this honorable poem deserves. But alas, it is Thursday and we both know what that means in Fan Story. I want you to know that I have had my share of instigative interaction with the lovely advanced editor. I think this particular poem and the wit that you have provided here: falls right into my lap, up my alley, and down my stream. Thank you for giving me a great belly laugh this afternoon. I appreciate when people offer these great visuals with their work! Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Fonda, for checking out my profile. Hope we have a good year. Bill
Comment from nomi338
No polagee needed. We all no how to reed an rite roun hear. we is intelignt enuf to no rite frum rong. we stayed in skul long nuff to gradjage wit honors. I tel u we is smart, smart an witty.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
No polagee needed. We all no how to reed an rite roun hear. we is intelignt enuf to no rite frum rong. we stayed in skul long nuff to gradjage wit honors. I tel u we is smart, smart an witty.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2019
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Nuff sped I reckon.
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durn tootin'
Comment from Joy Graham
Hi Bill,
This is a stand-out little poem :) You made me smile and resist the urge to correct your spelling lol! The message comes across as light-hearted. I hope I don't make any spelling mistakes like these in my posts in 2019. This could make a humorous contest.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
Hi Bill,
This is a stand-out little poem :) You made me smile and resist the urge to correct your spelling lol! The message comes across as light-hearted. I hope I don't make any spelling mistakes like these in my posts in 2019. This could make a humorous contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Joy, for giving this a look.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, I liked this. Yeah well. Never underestimate your self. And you're certainly not shy. Great wee poem where all seems to go. I've run out of words and not allowed to send this before now. Sorry! Ulla:))
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
Hi Bill, I liked this. Yeah well. Never underestimate your self. And you're certainly not shy. Great wee poem where all seems to go. I've run out of words and not allowed to send this before now. Sorry! Ulla:))
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Here?s what I do:
Back again to right;
hope i spell all the words write.
Pol?jize in advance.
This 5-7-5, A Poem, has the correct formatting and brings the mission of writing and reading into the new year with hope and determination.
Sometimes I will simply fill a line with periods to satisfy the character requirement...................
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It does, I agree. LOL!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, this is funny. On FS anything now counts as a poem. I enjoyed reading this. Your word choices are unique. I know you did all of this intentionally. But if not, some would lower the rating and tell you some unkind advice. Thanks for the laugh. Jan
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
Haha, this is funny. On FS anything now counts as a poem. I enjoyed reading this. Your word choices are unique. I know you did all of this intentionally. But if not, some would lower the rating and tell you some unkind advice. Thanks for the laugh. Jan
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Jan. I am often misunderstood.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Gee, you have made effective use of all your syllables in this creative
5-7-5. You have made the point that blatant errors can be creative.
LOL! Cute, humorous
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
Gee, you have made effective use of all your syllables in this creative
5-7-5. You have made the point that blatant errors can be creative.
LOL! Cute, humorous
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Janice
Comment from Miss Sherry
LOL...there, I did initials! You are a funny man, and very clever. More work goes into these ditties than shaving some kitties... Hope the new year is filled with your charming writes and wrongs!
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
LOL...there, I did initials! You are a funny man, and very clever. More work goes into these ditties than shaving some kitties... Hope the new year is filled with your charming writes and wrongs!
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thanks, OP. I?m expecting a great year for everyone.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Starting the New Year off in true Schott Form, I see....welk, I do think many of us would few just a tinge of loss of we didn't have our 'Bill of Wrirs Smile Infusion'! :) Thanx for the intentional 'write mixup', and ya just gotta love that 'pollogee'! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
Starting the New Year off in true Schott Form, I see....welk, I do think many of us would few just a tinge of loss of we didn't have our 'Bill of Wrirs Smile Infusion'! :) Thanx for the intentional 'write mixup', and ya just gotta love that 'pollogee'! :) Yvette
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Yvette. Happy reading and writing. Bill
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A bit of self promoting never hurt anyone and you will soon be picked up for bad spelling Bill, just post on Fanstory! He he he, and then await the onslaught, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
A bit of self promoting never hurt anyone and you will soon be picked up for bad spelling Bill, just post on Fanstory! He he he, and then await the onslaught, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Dolly.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL, this is brilliant, Bill, I love how you have done this. Oh, there is a small spelling mistake, but too small to bother with!!! LOL. Well done, and I look forward to another year of your unique humour! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
LOL, this is brilliant, Bill, I love how you have done this. Oh, there is a small spelling mistake, but too small to bother with!!! LOL. Well done, and I look forward to another year of your unique humour! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Sandra. Happy day.