A Heartfelt Breath at Last...
love five seven five6 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Hi Gregory, WOW!!!!....so that's what that deep breathing is all about...sigh...isn't love amazing...so very well described sweet guy...love your poem...picture perrrrrfect you...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Hi Gregory, WOW!!!!....so that's what that deep breathing is all about...sigh...isn't love amazing...so very well described sweet guy...love your poem...picture perrrrrfect you...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you for reading this! Love IS amazing
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yes it is...your sooo welcome...xxoo love
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This is one of the best, by far.
I love the nouns: ache, purpose, desire.
I love the the relationship between the last word in each line: breathes, lungs, inhale.
Your chosen image was perfect.
'Beautiful ache'...so much passion felt and expressed through these two words.
Great contest entry! Truly!
Gale
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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This is one of the best, by far.
I love the nouns: ache, purpose, desire.
I love the the relationship between the last word in each line: breathes, lungs, inhale.
Your chosen image was perfect.
'Beautiful ache'...so much passion felt and expressed through these two words.
Great contest entry! Truly!
Gale
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Wow what a great review Gale! Truly that means a lot, thank you. I hope you have a really good night and to read your work :)
Comment from visionary1234
Love this one ... found myself slowly breathing in as I read it! (And THAT'S hard to pull off in just 17 syllables). Kinda sexy ... encourages a slower pace of reading ... thoughtful. Great (and different) entry to this contest! :)
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Love this one ... found myself slowly breathing in as I read it! (And THAT'S hard to pull off in just 17 syllables). Kinda sexy ... encourages a slower pace of reading ... thoughtful. Great (and different) entry to this contest! :)
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thank you!! You really didn't have to but I really appreciate it. Thank you
Comment from tfawcus
Inspirational, in a manner of speaking. A breathtaking description of that strange beast called Love, that gets all of humanity breathing heavily at times.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Inspirational, in a manner of speaking. A breathtaking description of that strange beast called Love, that gets all of humanity breathing heavily at times.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much!!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author. Your well-chosen words read smoothly with and create great imagery for readers. Your picture choice is perfect, too. Your words plus the picture make a memorable presentation. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author. Your well-chosen words read smoothly with and create great imagery for readers. Your picture choice is perfect, too. Your words plus the picture make a memorable presentation. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 02-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thank you Jan! What a kind review. Truly, thank you for taking the time to read it. Have a really great night :)
Comment from Earl Corp
The seventeen syllable restriction of a 5-7-5 poem doesn't really afford you the opportunity to really develop a thought into a poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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The seventeen syllable restriction of a 5-7-5 poem doesn't really afford you the opportunity to really develop a thought into a poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2019
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Thank you!