Come To Me
Do you hear?25 total reviews
Comment from Cycler
Beautifully said. You've expanded Matthew's verse to many specific circumstance. You've covered much ground in your poem and I enjoyed reading your words and the many ways Jesus applies.
Thanks for sharing!
DB
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Beautifully said. You've expanded Matthew's verse to many specific circumstance. You've covered much ground in your poem and I enjoyed reading your words and the many ways Jesus applies.
Thanks for sharing!
DB
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind words.I am glad if it encouraged or inspired you. He does loves us all so much.
All my best,
Sal :+)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very well-written reminder to everyone that the hand is always extended toward us, we just need to reach out and take it. :) Thanx for that bright light for the day, ma'am -- great write! ;) :) Yvette
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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A very well-written reminder to everyone that the hand is always extended toward us, we just need to reach out and take it. :) Thanx for that bright light for the day, ma'am -- great write! ;) :) Yvette
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for the kind review. I am glad that it was a bright light for you and many others. I appreciate you so much!
All my best,
Sal :+)
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, Sally Law. I think you really captured what Jesus is saying to people with this piece. Only one small nit: To anyone listening who would harken to His voice, He says, "come to Me." (capitalize c in Come to Me.)
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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This was a good read, Sally Law. I think you really captured what Jesus is saying to people with this piece. Only one small nit: To anyone listening who would harken to His voice, He says, "come to Me." (capitalize c in Come to Me.)
Comment Written 17-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and insightful comments. I appreciate you so much. I will fix the typo, thank you.
All my best,
Sal :+)
Comment from Kathleen Washnis
Well done my friend! I especially liked your line that He longs to make your heart his own, His very home. So beautiful and so true! May someone give their heart to Him by reading these words you so clearly stated and leaving no one out. I believe when one writes and glorifies the Lord, nothing less than six stars will do for He is a seven star who is exceptional and worthy of nothing but the very best! And with you being a faithful servant, may blessings shine on you today and throughout this year! : ) p.s. I do like the picture of Jesus you found too
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Well done my friend! I especially liked your line that He longs to make your heart his own, His very home. So beautiful and so true! May someone give their heart to Him by reading these words you so clearly stated and leaving no one out. I believe when one writes and glorifies the Lord, nothing less than six stars will do for He is a seven star who is exceptional and worthy of nothing but the very best! And with you being a faithful servant, may blessings shine on you today and throughout this year! : ) p.s. I do like the picture of Jesus you found too
Comment Written 24-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for the outstanding review and encouraging words. I appreciate you so much. You have a tender spirit and heart for Christ...a true sister. My prayer is akin to yours. May many read this and come to the one who can give them life.
Love,
Sal
Comment from djeckert
Well done. I like the repeated and "stuck to", theme. You certainly gave life to that most awesome verse. The other great thing is that as soon as we turn around, we can immediately bump right into Jesus as long as our heart is right....He's always, in essence, "backing us up, or following us ...even though He says "come to me". Blessings.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Well done. I like the repeated and "stuck to", theme. You certainly gave life to that most awesome verse. The other great thing is that as soon as we turn around, we can immediately bump right into Jesus as long as our heart is right....He's always, in essence, "backing us up, or following us ...even though He says "come to me". Blessings.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and encouragement. This burned in my soul for weeks until I poured it out on the page. I felt the Holy Spirit say, ?Just write, I will tell you what to say.? I wrote it down in less than five minutes. It was a God thing. So glad you could appreciate this.
All my best,
Sal :+)
Comment from royowen
When people point to the travail on the earth. The suffering, misplaced persons with a home, small children dying from starvation, my heart weeps, I can but pray, I have no answers, I can God didn't do this, people do. I look to Jesus, and say Jesus said,"If you've seen me, you've seen the Father" and hope revives, suddenly one knows there is a God who cares. Well done Sally, beautifully written, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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When people point to the travail on the earth. The suffering, misplaced persons with a home, small children dying from starvation, my heart weeps, I can but pray, I have no answers, I can God didn't do this, people do. I look to Jesus, and say Jesus said,"If you've seen me, you've seen the Father" and hope revives, suddenly one knows there is a God who cares. Well done Sally, beautifully written, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kindest words. Yes, to see Jesus is to see the Father. To come to Jesus is to come to the Father.
I am so glad you could stop by today. This has burned in my heart for weeks. I just knew it was from God.
All my best,
Sally
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"All good gifts and perfect things are from above." You're right Sally, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your story, Sally. You did a great job writing of the message of Jesus. I like the repeated 'come to me.' Your lines flow well and the art is perfect. Thanks for the notes, too. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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I enjoyed your story, Sally. You did a great job writing of the message of Jesus. I like the repeated 'come to me.' Your lines flow well and the art is perfect. Thanks for the notes, too. Jan
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind encouragement. I appreciate your faithful reviews of my work. I am glad you liked this one. It had been burning in my heart for weeks. I had to write and post it. It was a God thing.
All my best,
Sal :+)
Comment from papa55mike
This very well-written and I love the use of scripture to back it up. That's all He wants from all of us it to come to Him and let His love flow into your heart and fill you with a passion that cannot be quenched. Can you tell I liked it!?
Have a great day and God bless.
m9ike
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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This very well-written and I love the use of scripture to back it up. That's all He wants from all of us it to come to Him and let His love flow into your heart and fill you with a passion that cannot be quenched. Can you tell I liked it!?
Have a great day and God bless.
m9ike
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for for the outstanding review and encouraging comments. I am so glad you liked it. (I could tell.) This had been burning in my heart and soul for weeks. I had to get it on FanStory at last. An urgent message for every person in theses times.
All my best,
Sal :+)
Comment from patcelaw
Sally, this is beautifully written and was a joy to read. It is wonderful that we have a God who calls unto us to come to Him and He listens to us when we come to Him. Patricia
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Sally, this is beautifully written and was a joy to read. It is wonderful that we have a God who calls unto us to come to Him and He listens to us when we come to Him. Patricia
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and encouragement. His love for us compels Him to call and if we would just come, our lives would be made new. This iwas a burning message God gave me weeks ago. I had to write it and post.
All my best,
Sally
Comment from Rob Caudle
Sally what beautiful piece poetry in prose and praise. A message that should be heard by all. In these troubled days where it seems many hearts have turned away. Let them all here him say... come to me. Very inspiring and uplifting.
Rob
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Sally what beautiful piece poetry in prose and praise. A message that should be heard by all. In these troubled days where it seems many hearts have turned away. Let them all here him say... come to me. Very inspiring and uplifting.
Rob
Comment Written 23-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for the outstanding review and encouraging words. Yes, many have chimed in that this was a necessary and needed post. I pray many will come for the first time, or return to Him once again. He loves us so much. What a wonderful Savior amd Lord we have!
All my best,
Sal :+)