lavender
haiku81 total reviews
Comment from moongirlwriter
Lavender in Italy. . .more romance under the Tuscan sun? Lovely thoughts, words and artwork. The very best of luck to you in the contest. Love lavender.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Lavender in Italy. . .more romance under the Tuscan sun? Lovely thoughts, words and artwork. The very best of luck to you in the contest. Love lavender.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Thank you for the lovely review. I appreciate you kind comments.
I too love lavender. Thank you too for the good wishes. This poem won the contest. I am so pleased.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Michael McCottry Bell Jr
love the creativity on this one my friend! And the image totally matches the poem A Roma Therapy(possible a slogan for a new Italian Perfume?) ;)
Great job!
Mike
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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love the creativity on this one my friend! And the image totally matches the poem A Roma Therapy(possible a slogan for a new Italian Perfume?) ;)
Great job!
Mike
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Thank you Mike for your encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments and a new Italian perfume is a great idea especially with a hint of lavender. 😊
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Janetsue
Congratulations on this stellar achievement!
I especially like the play on words in the last line. That is a very clever poetic element.
Way to go! --Spangle
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Congratulations on this stellar achievement!
I especially like the play on words in the last line. That is a very clever poetic element.
Way to go! --Spangle
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Thank you Spangle for your encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
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You're very welcome, Janet!
Comment from LisaMay
No wonder your delightful haiku won the contest. You have given us a beautiful presentation, visually with colour and picture choice, and the verbal skill is linked through scent and location.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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No wonder your delightful haiku won the contest. You have given us a beautiful presentation, visually with colour and picture choice, and the verbal skill is linked through scent and location.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Thank you Lisa May for your encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments. I was delighted to win.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from john mallahan
Ah, like that ending with the "A Roma Therapy" cleverness, on your part! Seattle area has a lavender festival out to the coast. Bought several there few years back. My yard is covered with several different varieties. Especially like the alba's which only discovered when I went! Congrats!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Ah, like that ending with the "A Roma Therapy" cleverness, on your part! Seattle area has a lavender festival out to the coast. Bought several there few years back. My yard is covered with several different varieties. Especially like the alba's which only discovered when I went! Congrats!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Thank you John for your thoughtful encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments. I think I read somewhere that the Pacific northwest is a perfect place to grow lavender. I grows here in NC but is not prolific.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from juliaSjames
Clever play on words in the satori line. The poem invokes the scent as well as the beautiful appearance of the lavender fields.
Congratulations on your contest win with this delightful entry.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Clever play on words in the satori line. The poem invokes the scent as well as the beautiful appearance of the lavender fields.
Congratulations on your contest win with this delightful entry.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Thank you Julia for your thoughtful encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 08-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
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Thank you - thank you - thank you.
This was a joy to write as I remembers the lovely lavender fields fields of Italy.
Blessings
Janet
Blessings
Janet
Comment from annh
Love this clever wee poem and the phonic pun in the final line! Your choice of graphic and presentation supports your writing beautifully. Best of luck in the contest. Cheers, annh :)
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Love this clever wee poem and the phonic pun in the final line! Your choice of graphic and presentation supports your writing beautifully. Best of luck in the contest. Cheers, annh :)
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for this thoughtful and encouraging review and the extra special rating. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it. It was fun to write plus I love lavender.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
This is a very fun play on words. Well done. I love lavender, it is a mild scent which I like, Unlike the Magnolia which I don't like at all. I do hope you do well in the contest. Rox
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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This is a very fun play on words. Well done. I love lavender, it is a mild scent which I like, Unlike the Magnolia which I don't like at all. I do hope you do well in the contest. Rox
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you Roxanna for your encouraging and thoughtful review. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this one. It was fun to write and remember those lavender fields.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from rspoet
Hello Janet,
This haiku should be very competitive in the contest.
You have all of the elements of a fine haiku:
imagery, connection, present tense, and intriguing satori line.
The picture matches well, but I always cover the picture
when considering haiku. Your stands up well by itself.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Hello Janet,
This haiku should be very competitive in the contest.
You have all of the elements of a fine haiku:
imagery, connection, present tense, and intriguing satori line.
The picture matches well, but I always cover the picture
when considering haiku. Your stands up well by itself.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2019
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Thank you Robert for your encouraging and generous sixth star review. I always appreciate hearing from you and I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this one. It was fun to write and remember those lavender fields.
Blessings
Janet