A Four Letter Word Called Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Grant Me Roses"A collection of love poems.
5 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a very poignant poem. You draw the reader in with the invitation to see how the foreshadowing plays out. Who passes first. I don't know if it was intentional but the tear she is shedding give the reader a hint that she will lose him but you surprised us by having it be her. This is a beautiful tribute to an undying relationship of love. I am voting for this one.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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This is a very poignant poem. You draw the reader in with the invitation to see how the foreshadowing plays out. Who passes first. I don't know if it was intentional but the tear she is shedding give the reader a hint that she will lose him but you surprised us by having it be her. This is a beautiful tribute to an undying relationship of love. I am voting for this one.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2019
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Thank you ever so much for the rating, review and vote!
Comment from l.raven
HI fm, This is just amazing...I love your story told my friend...just grant me a roses...one for every year...until I die...and then some...this would be a wonderful song...I love getting roses a gift...soooooo very well written...and your picture perrrrrfect...love your poem...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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HI fm, This is just amazing...I love your story told my friend...just grant me a roses...one for every year...until I die...and then some...this would be a wonderful song...I love getting roses a gift...soooooo very well written...and your picture perrrrrfect...love your poem...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Thank you ever so much for the rating and comments! Greatly appreciated!
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you are so very welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Truly a winner as i loved the progression to the last two lines where you changed them to be said from the other. Great rhyme and flow and loved the message of love
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Truly a winner as i loved the progression to the last two lines where you changed them to be said from the other. Great rhyme and flow and loved the message of love
Comment Written 20-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Thank you ever so much! I really do appreciate the stars and the comments!
Comment from beizanten
A beautiful picture it suit the poem. a lighthearted and well written first stanza, you intrigue me to read more. A romantic and well written poetry. you have done great, keep it up!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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A beautiful picture it suit the poem. a lighthearted and well written first stanza, you intrigue me to read more. A romantic and well written poetry. you have done great, keep it up!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Thank you! the rating and comments are greatly appreciated!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow --- now there's a love song for the ages, FM -- find yourself a musician and be sure to post the song when you're finished collaborating! ;) ;) Thank you so very much for sharing such an endearing and BEAUTIFUL piece -- if I had any 6-ers left, I would gladly lay one at your feet, sir... just heartbreakingly lovely! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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Wow --- now there's a love song for the ages, FM -- find yourself a musician and be sure to post the song when you're finished collaborating! ;) ;) Thank you so very much for sharing such an endearing and BEAUTIFUL piece -- if I had any 6-ers left, I would gladly lay one at your feet, sir... just heartbreakingly lovely! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 19-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2019
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I thank you very much for the desired rating and the wonderful comments!