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29 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Loved the Day-Tripper song, how very appropriate for Kayla, thinking she is fooling Charles, but he's starting to figure her out, and perhaps her role in this saga. Interesting times for Charles and an interesting chapter Tony.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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Loved the Day-Tripper song, how very appropriate for Kayla, thinking she is fooling Charles, but he's starting to figure her out, and perhaps her role in this saga. Interesting times for Charles and an interesting chapter Tony.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 08-May-2019
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I couldn't resist the Beatles song for this one - it seemed so appropriate. My vintage, too! LOL All the best, Tony
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good chapter, Tony,
that fills us in with a
few details about Kayla.
-Good descriptive detail
about how Andre was captured.
-You also characterize Kayla well.
-She is distraught, but Charles
is fishing for some information
about who might have been
following her.
-She doesn't have a lot of information,
disappears from the room for a while,
and comes back in a vibrant mood.
-Good foreshadowing of the ending,
and what Kayla's involvement in
the plot might be in the near future.
-There is obviously a connection
that Charles will act on in some way-
a regular James Bond, he is!
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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-A good chapter, Tony,
that fills us in with a
few details about Kayla.
-Good descriptive detail
about how Andre was captured.
-You also characterize Kayla well.
-She is distraught, but Charles
is fishing for some information
about who might have been
following her.
-She doesn't have a lot of information,
disappears from the room for a while,
and comes back in a vibrant mood.
-Good foreshadowing of the ending,
and what Kayla's involvement in
the plot might be in the near future.
-There is obviously a connection
that Charles will act on in some way-
a regular James Bond, he is!
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 03-May-2019
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Thanks, Pam. I'm beginning to get a feel for the shape of the last few chapters and an ending scenario. Thanks for your comments about this chapter and its place in the wider scheme of things. Best wishes, Tony.
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You are very welcome, Tony. I am glad things are coming together; I got a sense of that in this chapter.
Comment from TheStoryMan
What a fantastic chapter. There is so much going on in Charles' life. So many characters that behave in a questionable manner. I hope he's able to get all the answers he needs.
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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What a fantastic chapter. There is so much going on in Charles' life. So many characters that behave in a questionable manner. I hope he's able to get all the answers he needs.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Very many thanks for your review of Day Tripper. I appreciate your positive comments. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from rspoet
Hello Tony,
I was wondering when drugs would enter into the events of these characters. After all, Bellini was a dealer, Durant an undercover drug agent,
and the Bankok-Pakistani connection with a desperate young Kayla
suggests an addiction.
Kayla can now be a victim or a player in this intrigue.
(Clever title for the chapter!)
"Perhaps an actor at more than one level. And what about Kayla? If she's acting, then she's doing a mighty fine job of it." Excellent lines here that increase the mystery nicely.
Of course, this all leads back to the central plot of Terrorism.
The two sides of the clever Scaramouche may prove interesting.
Well done.
Robert
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Hello Tony,
I was wondering when drugs would enter into the events of these characters. After all, Bellini was a dealer, Durant an undercover drug agent,
and the Bankok-Pakistani connection with a desperate young Kayla
suggests an addiction.
Kayla can now be a victim or a player in this intrigue.
(Clever title for the chapter!)
"Perhaps an actor at more than one level. And what about Kayla? If she's acting, then she's doing a mighty fine job of it." Excellent lines here that increase the mystery nicely.
Of course, this all leads back to the central plot of Terrorism.
The two sides of the clever Scaramouche may prove interesting.
Well done.
Robert
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Very many thanks for your review of Day Tripper, Robert, and for your six star award. Yes, drug addiction was almost bound to feature at some stage, given the plot. It will be interesting to see how this affects Kayla's relationships with other characters such as Charles and Helen. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Dawn Munro
Uh, oh... Tony, this is a story I should have followed from the start of it. I am completely at a loss as far as plot is concerned, but sir, you sure can write! Even not having a clue as to what is happening in the story, one chapter (scene) is so easy to visualize, it's like watching a movie-- and of course, it's flawlessly written as well. Kayla's actions were so bizarre, yet so perfect -- exactly the kind of reaction one would expect.
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Uh, oh... Tony, this is a story I should have followed from the start of it. I am completely at a loss as far as plot is concerned, but sir, you sure can write! Even not having a clue as to what is happening in the story, one chapter (scene) is so easy to visualize, it's like watching a movie-- and of course, it's flawlessly written as well. Kayla's actions were so bizarre, yet so perfect -- exactly the kind of reaction one would expect.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 09-May-2019
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Very many thanks for your review of Day Tripper, Dawn, and for your six star award. I really appreciate the fact that you dropped in on this cold and value your positive comments. Best wishes, Tony
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You're very welcome.
Comment from estory
This was a step up from recent chapters, and you managed to really create an intriguing scene where we see Charles carefully digging into the mystery of Kayla's dealings, her associations, while at the same time failing to subdue his attraction for her on a physical level. The sharp descriptions and the realistic dialogue went a long way to construct this feeling of apprehension and arousal, of Charles' suspicion and Kayla's madcap, almost careless emotional display. And then we have those suspicions confirmed; the trace of white powder, the cocaine that attaches Kayla to the drug dealing terrorists. I liked the tension hanging in the air of this segment, the almost sinister quality of the hidden dangers in this beautiful woman. estory
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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This was a step up from recent chapters, and you managed to really create an intriguing scene where we see Charles carefully digging into the mystery of Kayla's dealings, her associations, while at the same time failing to subdue his attraction for her on a physical level. The sharp descriptions and the realistic dialogue went a long way to construct this feeling of apprehension and arousal, of Charles' suspicion and Kayla's madcap, almost careless emotional display. And then we have those suspicions confirmed; the trace of white powder, the cocaine that attaches Kayla to the drug dealing terrorists. I liked the tension hanging in the air of this segment, the almost sinister quality of the hidden dangers in this beautiful woman. estory
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Thanks, estory. I felt happier about this chapter than some of the recent ones and your comments and award of a sixth star are great validation. Many thanks, Tony
Comment from Sally Law
Wow, what a twist and a Beatles song, too. I enjoyed this so much. I could vividly imagine Charles dancing with Kayla. The "steady on girl" comment was just too much. She was anything but steady. Obvious, poor Kayla has fallen in with bad company. Looking forward to the next one, Tony.
All my best,
Sally :+)
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Wow, what a twist and a Beatles song, too. I enjoyed this so much. I could vividly imagine Charles dancing with Kayla. The "steady on girl" comment was just too much. She was anything but steady. Obvious, poor Kayla has fallen in with bad company. Looking forward to the next one, Tony.
All my best,
Sally :+)
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Many thanks, Sally, for your comments. Kayla's connection with the 'bad guys' is becoming clearer.
Comment from krys123
Cheers, Tony;
>{"Perhaps an actor at more than one level. And what about Kayla? If she's acting, then she's doing a mighty fine job of it."} More like an Oscar-winning performance!
> Oh no, Kayla's hooked on an artificial white wind's of happiness that just seemed to blow up her nose.
>This definitely makes me understand why and how Charles is coming to the conclusion that there is more than just espionage and terrorism.
I wonder Charles thinks that if Jeanne is being absorbed into the up-your-noes fantasies, like Kayla.
> Good proven transition between thought processes of Charles and Kayla I like how you woven those in.
>You, Just keep making it keep on making this story more interesting after every installment.
>Thanks for sharing Tony and take care and have a good one.
Alx
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Cheers, Tony;
>{"Perhaps an actor at more than one level. And what about Kayla? If she's acting, then she's doing a mighty fine job of it."} More like an Oscar-winning performance!
> Oh no, Kayla's hooked on an artificial white wind's of happiness that just seemed to blow up her nose.
>This definitely makes me understand why and how Charles is coming to the conclusion that there is more than just espionage and terrorism.
I wonder Charles thinks that if Jeanne is being absorbed into the up-your-noes fantasies, like Kayla.
> Good proven transition between thought processes of Charles and Kayla I like how you woven those in.
>You, Just keep making it keep on making this story more interesting after every installment.
>Thanks for sharing Tony and take care and have a good one.
Alx
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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As always, thanks very much for your interesting and informative review, Alx, and for the affirmation of that sixth star! All very much appreciated. Best wishes, Tony
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Your very welcome, Tony, I what's becoming to become fun, Is I don't know what's coming next?! chuckle!
Alx
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written chapter. It seems indeed everything start to fall in the right places and the puzzle will soon be completed and every secret will be uncovered.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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A very well-written chapter. It seems indeed everything start to fall in the right places and the puzzle will soon be completed and every secret will be uncovered.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Very many thanks for your continued reading of my story and for your support. Very much appreciated, Sandra. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from JudyE
So at least one thing is starting to make a bit of sense to your lead character. I didn't find any typos or spags but just enjoyed a thoroughly good read. Have a great evening. Judy
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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So at least one thing is starting to make a bit of sense to your lead character. I didn't find any typos or spags but just enjoyed a thoroughly good read. Have a great evening. Judy
Comment Written 29-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2019
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Thanks, Judy. Six stars and no spags! Whoopee! I must be getting better...
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You're only as good as the last review!!! haha