My Guardian
2 Stanza Poem Contest Entry17 total reviews
Comment from Beri Bee
This is great! I didn't know where it was going or see it coming! Vigilante dragon protection at its finest! Not to make light, it's really beautiful! I love the imagery. To me, there's something very symbolic about a world where only one dragon and one elf remain. It brings up an almost frantic feeling of the need to protect the magical world that would be assassinated so easily by those who hate it, fear it, and don't believe in it. Well done!
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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This is great! I didn't know where it was going or see it coming! Vigilante dragon protection at its finest! Not to make light, it's really beautiful! I love the imagery. To me, there's something very symbolic about a world where only one dragon and one elf remain. It brings up an almost frantic feeling of the need to protect the magical world that would be assassinated so easily by those who hate it, fear it, and don't believe in it. Well done!
Comment Written 02-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Beri. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful night.
Ron
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Thank YOU, Ron! You are most welcome!
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Beautifully illustrated, and I loved the Fantasy story within the poem and the happy ending for the dragon and the elf. Very creative and thought out :) and a great contest entry!
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Beautifully illustrated, and I loved the Fantasy story within the poem and the happy ending for the dragon and the elf. Very creative and thought out :) and a great contest entry!
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 02-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Gale. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Ron
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written two-line stanza poem about your guardian that happens to be a dragon and no one can get close to you when he is there to protect you.
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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A very well-written two-line stanza poem about your guardian that happens to be a dragon and no one can get close to you when he is there to protect you.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Sandra. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Bill Pinder
I know who wrote this one. Great job, dragon-lover! Great job building an interesting idea around a picture. nothing like a good dragon-elf combo.
Bill
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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I know who wrote this one. Great job, dragon-lover! Great job building an interesting idea around a picture. nothing like a good dragon-elf combo.
Bill
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review and the big sixer, Bill. So you know who this is, huh? Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked my little tale. Have a great night. Thank you again.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Certainly a mystery as to whether we are fantasizing or allegorically presenting a situation. An intriguing poem and very well synchronized.
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Certainly a mystery as to whether we are fantasizing or allegorically presenting a situation. An intriguing poem and very well synchronized.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Raffaelina. I'm glad you liked my little offering.
Comment from LisaMay
This poem of yours got my vote. Beautifully written about the precious rare creatures that are persecuted for no good reason. Really nice cadence and rhyme.
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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This poem of yours got my vote. Beautifully written about the precious rare creatures that are persecuted for no good reason. Really nice cadence and rhyme.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you so much for the great review and support, Lisa. I'm glad you liked my little tale.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your two-stanza poem is very skillfully written and appealing. It vividly
conveys the age-old message of the hero who fights for and protects the weak.
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Your two-stanza poem is very skillfully written and appealing. It vividly
conveys the age-old message of the hero who fights for and protects the weak.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you, Janice. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from royowen
I loved this rather sweet poem about the last elf, rescuing a gentle beast from the snares of malicious men. Beautifully written two stanza work, sweetly laid out and articulately written, smooth flow, great language and abab rhyming and pentametric stanzas, good luck, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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I loved this rather sweet poem about the last elf, rescuing a gentle beast from the snares of malicious men. Beautifully written two stanza work, sweetly laid out and articulately written, smooth flow, great language and abab rhyming and pentametric stanzas, good luck, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Roy. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
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Most welcome
Comment from LyndaS
What a beautiful post. Both the formatting and the text. So easy to fall into these words and be right there in this fantasy story. Perfect meter. I loved the being protected by a dragon finish of this. You packed a powerful poem in this limited vehicle. Very well done. Good luck in the vote. Lynda
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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What a beautiful post. Both the formatting and the text. So easy to fall into these words and be right there in this fantasy story. Perfect meter. I loved the being protected by a dragon finish of this. You packed a powerful poem in this limited vehicle. Very well done. Good luck in the vote. Lynda
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and the big six, Lynda. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars. Yes, it was a challenge to try to get all this adventure crammed into 2 stanzas. I'm glad you liked the piece. Thank you again. Have a wonderful day.
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Any time. Sixers just fall off the vine with an entry like this.
Comment from Earl Corp
You packed a lot into a two stanza poem. It rhymed, made sense , and it entertained the Hell out of me. The graphic you chose to accompany it is awesome. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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You packed a lot into a two stanza poem. It rhymed, made sense , and it entertained the Hell out of me. The graphic you chose to accompany it is awesome. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Earl. I'm glad you liked the piece.