Exotic Dream
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Comment from Mia Twysted
This is great. There is passion, wanting, and desire. You can feel the intense emotion he feels for her and then just when you get into the scene you hear the alarm and the dream is over.
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This is great. There is passion, wanting, and desire. You can feel the intense emotion he feels for her and then just when you get into the scene you hear the alarm and the dream is over.
Comment Written 06-May-2019
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Ah! the dreaded alarm. Yes, that is a bummer. And to awake after such a dream must be so hard on a guy. Oops did I just say that... tee he he... I loved the poem, I think it is a good offering for this fun category that I totally missed out on. I honestly didn't know there was a category until after I had written and posted a poem that belonged in it. I was submitting my poem today that I wrote a few weeks ago - and today was the day I posted it when someone read it - they asked me why I didn't include it in the contest. I am just one of those people that is never really in the loop anymore but this would have beat it by far. Did I just say beat it? Yes, I did! I hope you enjoyed my innuendos. Good luck with your contest. Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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Ah! the dreaded alarm. Yes, that is a bummer. And to awake after such a dream must be so hard on a guy. Oops did I just say that... tee he he... I loved the poem, I think it is a good offering for this fun category that I totally missed out on. I honestly didn't know there was a category until after I had written and posted a poem that belonged in it. I was submitting my poem today that I wrote a few weeks ago - and today was the day I posted it when someone read it - they asked me why I didn't include it in the contest. I am just one of those people that is never really in the loop anymore but this would have beat it by far. Did I just say beat it? Yes, I did! I hope you enjoyed my innuendos. Good luck with your contest. Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 06-May-2019
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I enjoyed your remarks. You hit the nail right on the head. Oops, did I just say head? Thank you.
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So much fun innuendo!! I can?t wait Tonfind our who wrote this 👿Cheers, Fonda
Comment from A Little Bird
This is an amusing and relatable read! Don't we all just hate it when we are in the middle of an amazing dream and then we wake up! Good luck with the competition!
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This is an amusing and relatable read! Don't we all just hate it when we are in the middle of an amazing dream and then we wake up! Good luck with the competition!
Comment Written 03-May-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
He he he, this is a dream most men desire, the dream that fulfils all their hopes about a Goddess wanting only them! Your poem made me smile and it is a pleasure to read, love Dolly x
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He he he, this is a dream most men desire, the dream that fulfils all their hopes about a Goddess wanting only them! Your poem made me smile and it is a pleasure to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-May-2019
