Lance Romance
A man and his play things.3 total reviews
Comment from Lobber
Hi guy,
Your best innuendo line "genuine to a he extent needed" is also genuine. Too bad your "in the end" line isn't a pun. Graphic is great - almost textbook art without emotion - which is very appropriate. The color could be tweaked up to a hotter red instead of the "rose." - Lobber
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Hi guy,
Your best innuendo line "genuine to a he extent needed" is also genuine. Too bad your "in the end" line isn't a pun. Graphic is great - almost textbook art without emotion - which is very appropriate. The color could be tweaked up to a hotter red instead of the "rose." - Lobber
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The boy had the nicest or beautiful play things with him as he could play and make fun at his ease and time; well said, well done. Thanks for sharing; write legible to inspire, readable for years -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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The boy had the nicest or beautiful play things with him as he could play and make fun at his ease and time; well said, well done. Thanks for sharing; write legible to inspire, readable for years -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thank you for the review.
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, beautiful piece of poetry and well laid out work. Attractive image makes the presentation beautiful and secondly, you rhymed better. Good English command and rich vocabulary. I highly recommend your work to others.
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Hi, beautiful piece of poetry and well laid out work. Attractive image makes the presentation beautiful and secondly, you rhymed better. Good English command and rich vocabulary. I highly recommend your work to others.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thank you. I just changed the artwork. What do you think?
