They chose me
So sad and lonely in the orphanage4 total reviews
Comment from L. A. Stanley
I like the artwork you chose for this piece, and I like your words. I like that you put your antonyms in all caps, so that they stand out. I also really like your message. Nothing like feeling WANTED! Good job!
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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I like the artwork you chose for this piece, and I like your words. I like that you put your antonyms in all caps, so that they stand out. I also really like your message. Nothing like feeling WANTED! Good job!
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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I love your review. Thank you so much
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet .. I gave you your second vote!
I like the subject you chose for this antonym contest.
Children that have already known hardships at such a tender age .. it's really heart breaking.
There are hundreds and thousands of children ..war victims ..who will never know the feel of growing up in a safe and loving environment.
I hope you do well in the contest !
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Ciao mystery poet .. I gave you your second vote!
I like the subject you chose for this antonym contest.
Children that have already known hardships at such a tender age .. it's really heart breaking.
There are hundreds and thousands of children ..war victims ..who will never know the feel of growing up in a safe and loving environment.
I hope you do well in the contest !
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thank you so much for the vote and the great review
Comment from RodG
Your poem has an Oliver Twist happy ending. I wonder how many OLDER children are adopted these days and find happy homes where they are wanted. Good choice of antonyms to bookend your poem. Rod
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Your poem has an Oliver Twist happy ending. I wonder how many OLDER children are adopted these days and find happy homes where they are wanted. Good choice of antonyms to bookend your poem. Rod
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thanks Rod
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
It's kind of funny that all that sadness, misery, loneliness and JOY could be wrapped into one tiny poem. But somehow you made it work. *smile* Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Dear Mystery Poet,
It's kind of funny that all that sadness, misery, loneliness and JOY could be wrapped into one tiny poem. But somehow you made it work. *smile* Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Thanks Robyn