You Are Such a Puzzle
Antonym poetry3 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is cleverly written. I especially love the picture you chose. We are all like the challenging puzzling rubics cubes. We have many colorful facets to try to understand about ourselves. We are very difficult for anyone else to figure out. They may twist parts of us this way and that and get nowhere except frustrated themselves and us worn down. This is a great metaphor and juxtaposition, Well thought out and expressed. I am voting for this.
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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This is cleverly written. I especially love the picture you chose. We are all like the challenging puzzling rubics cubes. We have many colorful facets to try to understand about ourselves. We are very difficult for anyone else to figure out. They may twist parts of us this way and that and get nowhere except frustrated themselves and us worn down. This is a great metaphor and juxtaposition, Well thought out and expressed. I am voting for this.
Comment Written 16-May-2019
reply by the author on 16-May-2019
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Thank you so much!!! I am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Dorothy Day
Loved your poem, but would correct the title to You're for you are. It is easy to overlook the little grammar mistakes, and my fingers are self-motivated to master typos. The picture is so appropriate. Each of us is a puzzle--but worth the effort if someone loves us enough to puzzle us out by seeing in.
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Loved your poem, but would correct the title to You're for you are. It is easy to overlook the little grammar mistakes, and my fingers are self-motivated to master typos. The picture is so appropriate. Each of us is a puzzle--but worth the effort if someone loves us enough to puzzle us out by seeing in.
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Thank you so much, Dorothy!!
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent antonym poem with clever
use of in/out as antonyms and very good connection
in the two middle lines
Perfect art work choice
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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You've written an excellent antonym poem with clever
use of in/out as antonyms and very good connection
in the two middle lines
Perfect art work choice
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 15-May-2019
reply by the author on 15-May-2019
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Thanks so much, Robert.