That first kiss
romance poem2 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and syllable count. The theme evokes the sense of excitement a new and budding relationship brings into one's life. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and syllable count. The theme evokes the sense of excitement a new and budding relationship brings into one's life. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Cheers, thanks for the review. I might do a part two. Fair season coming up here in Vermont. Love them. Wish you a wonderful Fourth of July.
Comment from Bill Schott
This romantic 5-7-5, That First Kiss, has the right set up and identifies the qualities we remember when we touched those soft, quivering lips of the one we loved. Nice.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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This romantic 5-7-5, That First Kiss, has the right set up and identifies the qualities we remember when we touched those soft, quivering lips of the one we loved. Nice.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Ahh, those first kisses, everything new again! Nothing like romance to bring us around. Thanks for the review Bill, wishing you and your family a wonderful fourth.