From worlds apart
Love found10 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of all your syllables in this very romantic poem that breathes new life into the expression "opposites attract."
The artwork is stunning.
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You have made effective use of all your syllables in this very romantic poem that breathes new life into the expression "opposites attract."
The artwork is stunning.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from June Sargent
Beautiful sentiments expressed in a few short lines. It is not only a romantic piece, but a relevant one. We need to allow ourselves to embrace one another's differences instead letting them separate us. Thanks for sharing.
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Beautiful sentiments expressed in a few short lines. It is not only a romantic piece, but a relevant one. We need to allow ourselves to embrace one another's differences instead letting them separate us. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
True love it seems can be found in the most unexpected places sometimes. It's something that many times isn't planned. Many times when looking for it, you can't find it. The moment that you're about to give up and not look anymore, then, here it comes. I enjoyed reading this well written work about finding love in an unexpected place. Well done!
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True love it seems can be found in the most unexpected places sometimes. It's something that many times isn't planned. Many times when looking for it, you can't find it. The moment that you're about to give up and not look anymore, then, here it comes. I enjoyed reading this well written work about finding love in an unexpected place. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
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Comment from Darlene Franklin
A love poem about those improbably loves, the true love and passion it takes to come together as one. I like the image, but worlds apart could be so many different things apart from race. Good poem--good luck.
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A love poem about those improbably loves, the true love and passion it takes to come together as one. I like the image, but worlds apart could be so many different things apart from race. Good poem--good luck.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written romnantic 5-7-5 poem, when two strangers meet they have a special bond that joined them as one when true love and passion fused together.
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A very well-written romnantic 5-7-5 poem, when two strangers meet they have a special bond that joined them as one when true love and passion fused together.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Love knows know bounds when it is true and has a good foundation, that connection crosses oceans and climbs mountains in order to be united, and you said it all in just a few words, a joyous write, love Dolly x
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Love knows know bounds when it is true and has a good foundation, that connection crosses oceans and climbs mountains in order to be united, and you said it all in just a few words, a joyous write, love Dolly x
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
True love and passion fuse togetherness, growth and progression in course of living in coherence and harmony through love at hearts; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
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True love and passion fuse togetherness, growth and progression in course of living in coherence and harmony through love at hearts; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
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Comment from Janetsue
So much is being said in both words and between the lines. This is one of those poems that causes the reader to ponder upon it for a while and appreciate the depth of the message. I like this very much.
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So much is being said in both words and between the lines. This is one of those poems that causes the reader to ponder upon it for a while and appreciate the depth of the message. I like this very much.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
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Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
This is an interesting post. You've chosen an amazing image to bring your words to life. It's truly remarkable.
I like your words, too. I always wonder a bit when 'passion' plays a big part though because that fades some over time. True love is much more than that. Hmmm...
Good luck!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Dear Mystery Writer,
This is an interesting post. You've chosen an amazing image to bring your words to life. It's truly remarkable.
I like your words, too. I always wonder a bit when 'passion' plays a big part though because that fades some over time. True love is much more than that. Hmmm...
Good luck!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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I agree, though once fused it couldn't fade, that was the intention many thanks
Comment from Raul1
I like how you structured this poem. It is very easy to read and understand. Well written! No grammatical errors. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
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I like how you structured this poem. It is very easy to read and understand. Well written! No grammatical errors. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much
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You're welcome.