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Turn down the lights, babe11 total reviews
Comment from arman khan
This is really romantic. The atmosphere is romantic .Candles , night , wine , soft dress and dessert , whole make a scene, rather somewhat erotic.what Is amazing that without any real human character , the picture comes in the mind of a lovely couple .And whatever your imagination takes you away after that beautiful sight.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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This is really romantic. The atmosphere is romantic .Candles , night , wine , soft dress and dessert , whole make a scene, rather somewhat erotic.what Is amazing that without any real human character , the picture comes in the mind of a lovely couple .And whatever your imagination takes you away after that beautiful sight.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thanx for your review, arman -- so glad you seem to have gotten the atmosphere and innuendos I tried to convey in this short write. Take care! ;)
Comment from JanPerry
Hi. I'm hoping this is a female's work. What with the neglishay and all. When you say "dessert is on me" do u mean on your body? Like sex in the city? I like the moving wine. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Hi. I'm hoping this is a female's work. What with the neglishay and all. When you say "dessert is on me" do u mean on your body? Like sex in the city? I like the moving wine. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2019
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Thank you for your review, Jan. :) ;)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
The picture is painted and the scene is set with much anticipation of the passion and romance to come. The partaking of wine. I don't know if a meal will be thought about after viewing the dessert. I enjoyed reading this stimulating and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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The picture is painted and the scene is set with much anticipation of the passion and romance to come. The partaking of wine. I don't know if a meal will be thought about after viewing the dessert. I enjoyed reading this stimulating and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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LOL!! I would hope that you are correct, Jeffrey! Thank you for the wonderful review!
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Delightful poem, hits all the right romantic buttons. The dessert's on me reminds of Mike & Molly! May you have a happy, patriotic, romantic independence day.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Delightful poem, hits all the right romantic buttons. The dessert's on me reminds of Mike & Molly! May you have a happy, patriotic, romantic independence day.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for this cool review, Darlene!
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You're welcome
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written romantic 5-7-5 poem about the passion and romance mixed together that make a night with a loved one a special evening left the lovers without much words.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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A very well-written romantic 5-7-5 poem about the passion and romance mixed together that make a night with a loved one a special evening left the lovers without much words.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you so very much for your review, Sandra!!
Comment from LisaMay
Have you covered yourself in chocolate?? Your lucky lover can get licking after the wine has been sipped. Your 'soft, flowing lines' have been poetically well used. Now don't rip that negligee!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Have you covered yourself in chocolate?? Your lucky lover can get licking after the wine has been sipped. Your 'soft, flowing lines' have been poetically well used. Now don't rip that negligee!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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No chocolate...it'll mess up the negligee - lol! Thanks for your great review - so appreciated!!
Comment from Debbie Pope
You turn up the heat with this one, mystery writer. Nice job of creating a romantic mood. I can see this on a Hallmark card. It's just plain good. Good luck in the contest. Looks like a winner to me.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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You turn up the heat with this one, mystery writer. Nice job of creating a romantic mood. I can see this on a Hallmark card. It's just plain good. Good luck in the contest. Looks like a winner to me.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thanks for your awesome review -- always appreciated!!
Comment from Sheridan1
Sexy-romantic-playful. All the things we want a night to be. The photo and 'candles' speak of the heat. Its succinctness carries all the information we need. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Sexy-romantic-playful. All the things we want a night to be. The photo and 'candles' speak of the heat. Its succinctness carries all the information we need. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Sheridan, so glad you enjoyed! Appreciate your stopping by!!
Comment from way2gokevs
You paint a picture of a truly romantic interlude in your Haiku poem...
Very descriptive, good work, hope you do well in the competition........
Cheers, have a great day, Kev.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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You paint a picture of a truly romantic interlude in your Haiku poem...
Very descriptive, good work, hope you do well in the competition........
Cheers, have a great day, Kev.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Thanks, Kev, so glad you enjoyed! Appreciate the review!!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Mystery Writer. That is a great picture for the poem. What caught my eye was the last line. That is a line that could mean multiple things. It was a clever touch.
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer. That is a great picture for the poem. What caught my eye was the last line. That is a line that could mean multiple things. It was a clever touch.
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Comment Written 03-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2019
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And THAT is exactly why I used it...;) Thank you for your review, Robert, always appreciated!
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Well done. You're welcome.