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A Four Letter Word Called Love

Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "My Every Breath"
A collection of love poems.

4 total reviews 
Comment from scongrove
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Love this, Faye! Your poem would go perfect on a Valentine's card. This is very romantic. You're good with words of love.

Thanks for sharing!
Hugs,
Shana :)

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
    Thank you Shana, I deeply appreciate the review, the comments and all the stars! Hugs, Faye :)
reply by scongrove on 15-Sep-2019
    You are truly welcome and well deserved. :)
Comment from Sally Law
Excellent
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This reminds me of the song by Gladys Knight and the Pips, 'Every Beat Of My Heart.' A lovely sugar sweet offering to your spouse and entry for the Love Poem Poetry Contest. Sending you my best today and for the upcoming contest,
Sally xo

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
    Thank you ever so much for the review, comments and wishes. Greatly appreciated!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent
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This love poem speaks your feeling and emotion about your love in appreciation of which you say she is your love, your breath, your existence, you are incomplete without her, she is your every breath; well said, well done.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
    Thank you ever so much for the review and your generous comments.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Excellent
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This meets the contest requirements beautifully as you deliver a well penned poem about the essence of love artfully. It is quite stirring in its simplicity and inspiring in its content. Might I suggest using a dark blue for the font as it will stand put more clearly and tie into the darker blue of the artwork harmoniously. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
    Appreciate your review and input. I shall make the background a darker color.