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Fallen leaves make beautiful carpets, but...
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Comment from
Y. M. Roger
A down side to have many shade trees in the yard... ;) :) A well-constructed 5-7-5 with a message of 'jobs' to come! ;) Thanks for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
Sure is. Thanks for the read and the comment.
Comment from
Susan X Smith
This carpet is obviously the fallen leaves, as the picture you chose demonstrates. I enjoyed reading the poem. I note that there is quite a dichotomy between the second and third lines.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
Oh yes a even though beautiful, still hard work. Thanks for the read and the comment.
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