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Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a very cute 5-7-5 poem about the cockroach killers and how they are dressed for successful stomping. You used very cute words and very neat imagery from the picture of the boots. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Bill, This is a very cute 5-7-5 poem about the cockroach killers and how they are dressed for successful stomping. You used very cute words and very neat imagery from the picture of the boots. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You deliver a well penned and creatively witty 5-7-5. The alliteration added both flavor and visual stimulation to the piece. Guess those nasty little roaches better run and hide. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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You deliver a well penned and creatively witty 5-7-5. The alliteration added both flavor and visual stimulation to the piece. Guess those nasty little roaches better run and hide. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Thanks again.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
HOORAY! I cheer for ANYTHING that kills roaches -- especially stylish boots!! ;) :) They also do a mean job on near-by shins...lol! Thanx for sharing that smile!! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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HOORAY! I cheer for ANYTHING that kills roaches -- especially stylish boots!! ;) :) They also do a mean job on near-by shins...lol! Thanx for sharing that smile!! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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You can kick chickens with them too.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, I loved this write and I have been waiting a long time for a write about the cockroaches from you Bill, you scored here, those boots are definitely made for cockroach stomping, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Ha ha ha, I loved this write and I have been waiting a long time for a write about the cockroaches from you Bill, you scored here, those boots are definitely made for cockroach stomping, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Thanks, Dolly. I will reprise the cockroaches for you.
Comment from nomi338
The more narrow the toe, the better for trapping them little suckers in a corner and stomping hell out of them. As a matter of fact, in the hood, narrow toed shoes and boots are called: 'roach killers', an appropriate name if there ever was one.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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The more narrow the toe, the better for trapping them little suckers in a corner and stomping hell out of them. As a matter of fact, in the hood, narrow toed shoes and boots are called: 'roach killers', an appropriate name if there ever was one.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thanks, nomi,
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Icky, I detest cockroaches. One place I worked was infested with them. I didn't want to stomp on then because I might have carried their eggs home. A good 5-7-5, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Icky, I detest cockroaches. One place I worked was infested with them. I didn't want to stomp on then because I might have carried their eggs home. A good 5-7-5, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Thanks, Debbie
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. Those boots are made for more than walking but for stomping. I think they should change the words of the song to follow your poem's use of them!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Lol. Those boots are made for more than walking but for stomping. I think they should change the words of the song to follow your poem's use of them!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thanks, lyenochka