Living In Saturn, The Gas Planet
5-7-5 Poem10 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is an interesting entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of life on Saturn.
Well done. I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
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I think this is an interesting entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt.
Your short verse tells of life on Saturn.
Well done. I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 17-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Bill Pinder
The rings of Saturn are a great idea for a poem. Thanks for sharing this writing and have a merry Christmas! I wonder how you came up with that idea of that plan being fun and friendly.
Bill
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
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The rings of Saturn are a great idea for a poem. Thanks for sharing this writing and have a merry Christmas! I wonder how you came up with that idea of that plan being fun and friendly.
Bill
Comment Written 17-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Therese Caron
I'm glad this is humor, I was starting to think about what we could possibly do on Saturn! It is funny to look at what appears to be a barren planet with a ring around it,
and greetings from someone who says how much there is to do! You wrote this little poem very well and it did indeed poke fun at astronomy. Lovely image of Saturn! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
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I'm glad this is humor, I was starting to think about what we could possibly do on Saturn! It is funny to look at what appears to be a barren planet with a ring around it,
and greetings from someone who says how much there is to do! You wrote this little poem very well and it did indeed poke fun at astronomy. Lovely image of Saturn! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from RShipp
Your picture is certainly dead on for your poem.
Interplanetary travel does seem to be just around the corner. One wonders what all it will hold.
Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
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Your picture is certainly dead on for your poem.
Interplanetary travel does seem to be just around the corner. One wonders what all it will hold.
Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from JudyE
It is interesting to think about what might be 'normal' on other planets. Maybe one day we'll find out for ourselves. I don't know if the contest is over yet but good luck if it is still in the pipeline.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
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It is interesting to think about what might be 'normal' on other planets. Maybe one day we'll find out for ourselves. I don't know if the contest is over yet but good luck if it is still in the pipeline.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
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Thanks! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Ogden
That's a lot of gas you're sharing with us earthlings. For your sake, I hope the weather out there is better than ours.
Good luck in this down to Earth contest!
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
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That's a lot of gas you're sharing with us earthlings. For your sake, I hope the weather out there is better than ours.
Good luck in this down to Earth contest!
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 17-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019
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Thanks! I'm so happy that you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
One day we will all have to live on another planet as the sun will not shine on the earth forever, so as daft as your words sound, there is much truth in them, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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One day we will all have to live on another planet as the sun will not shine on the earth forever, so as daft as your words sound, there is much truth in them, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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Thank you! You are right that we will need to live in another planet someday. I like your point of view. Well, though out! I am happy you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem and a humorous look at Saturn where there are lots of fun things to do on the. Extremely Gassy planet the earthlings may find amusing.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem and a humorous look at Saturn where there are lots of fun things to do on the. Extremely Gassy planet the earthlings may find amusing.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I am happy you have enjoyed my silly poem!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yeah, can't say I agree with you there... :) :) lol! A fun offering for the contest that is truly unique and thought-provoking! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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Yeah, can't say I agree with you there... :) :) lol! A fun offering for the contest that is truly unique and thought-provoking! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 16-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-I like your topic choice
and your approach to it!
-The greeting is a clever idea,
and I like how there
is more between the lines, too!
-Effective alliteration, good
description, and concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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-Very nice image
and presentation.
-I like your topic choice
and your approach to it!
-The greeting is a clever idea,
and I like how there
is more between the lines, too!
-Effective alliteration, good
description, and concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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Thank you! I'm so happy you have enjoyed my poem!
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You are welcome. I liked it very much, and I am glad you are happy:)