Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Another Decade"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Another Decade, has the proper formatting and lets us know that ten short years have slipped by. Barrack Obama was half way through his first term, 230,000 Haitians died in a earthquake, and BP filled the Gulf with oil.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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This 3-5-3, Another Decade, has the proper formatting and lets us know that ten short years have slipped by. Barrack Obama was half way through his first term, 230,000 Haitians died in a earthquake, and BP filled the Gulf with oil.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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Bill, I am entering my 7th decade and the history that has come and gone in these years are nothing but amazing. I can't wait for the next ten to see if mankind can figure it out.....here's hoping!
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. Although this type of poem is very short, your message was clear. I enjoyed reading it. Very well done.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. Although this type of poem is very short, your message was clear. I enjoyed reading it. Very well done.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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Sandra, thank you for the compliment.
Comment from Susan X Smith
Congratulations on winning the contest. This is a short and sweet poem which well met the guidelines, and proved to be successful. The words are well chosen, and the picture, of course, was too.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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Congratulations on winning the contest. This is a short and sweet poem which well met the guidelines, and proved to be successful. The words are well chosen, and the picture, of course, was too.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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Susan thank for the congratulations! I am always humbly grateful for the wins, with such a wealth of talented poets always putting up great work.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
JLR: CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN!
Yeah also for a healthy and long life with your
precious family. Hope you have fun together
in the new decade. flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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JLR: CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN!
Yeah also for a healthy and long life with your
precious family. Hope you have fun together
in the new decade. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much, Lets do a virtual high five at the end of this forthcoming decade!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Snap for the decade! I feel better than ever mentally, but a little unfit physically. I liked this piece very much. It uplifts me and reassures me that things could get even better...
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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Snap for the decade! I feel better than ever mentally, but a little unfit physically. I liked this piece very much. It uplifts me and reassures me that things could get even better...
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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Katherine, thank you for reviewing and commenting, I will hitting my 7th decade and going strong, YEAH!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt.
Yes, another decade is gone. Where, oh where, does the time go?
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 writing prompt.
Yes, another decade is gone. Where, oh where, does the time go?
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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Thank you Sharon, I will do a virtual high-five at the end of the next one with you!
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You bet!
Comment from Raul1
I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the contest! Yes, another year has passed away and the new one begins. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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I think that this poem has a very good chance of winning the contest! Yes, another year has passed away and the new one begins. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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Thank you sir!
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You're welcome
Comment from LeannaP
I thought this made for an interesting entry for the contest.
You write well.
I liked the last line when you encourage others to start anew.
Nicely written
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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I thought this made for an interesting entry for the contest.
You write well.
I liked the last line when you encourage others to start anew.
Nicely written
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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Leanna,, thank you very much for kind words.
Comment from dragonpoet
This short poem is full of hope for a renewal of life in the change
of the year. We all could do one thing to change for the better.
Good luck and keep writing
Happy Holidays
Joan
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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This short poem is full of hope for a renewal of life in the change
of the year. We all could do one thing to change for the better.
Good luck and keep writing
Happy Holidays
Joan
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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Joan thank you, happy holidays to you!
Comment from rjuselius
indeed, if it would be possible to erase the past, i would change so many things dear anonymous! a profound little piece of poetry!
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a Christmas cheers!
rebekka xxx
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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indeed, if it would be possible to erase the past, i would change so many things dear anonymous! a profound little piece of poetry!
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a Christmas cheers!
rebekka xxx
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2019
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Rebekka, the most wise thing I have come to learn in my now end of 6 decades of life is --don't regret the should a, could a, would a past, but embrace the hear and now, and do everything you can not to think about that yet to be. I celebrate the Rebekka, right here and right now! May your Christmas be the best one ever!