Prayerful Intentions
Reading the good book for the right reasons19 total reviews
Comment from Susan Larson
While I am not familiar with the tyburn style of poetry, I was drawn in by your repetition of "read, heed, need, plead" and your reference to the scripture. I like the picture that goes with it "consider the lilies how they grow" which reflect the words of your poem.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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While I am not familiar with the tyburn style of poetry, I was drawn in by your repetition of "read, heed, need, plead" and your reference to the scripture. I like the picture that goes with it "consider the lilies how they grow" which reflect the words of your poem.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Susan thank you!
Comment from rjuselius
this is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear anonymous! however your poem is written wrong yet the committee has probably got you to change the faults.
anyhoo, thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a Christmas cheer hug!
rebekka xxx
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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this is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear anonymous! however your poem is written wrong yet the committee has probably got you to change the faults.
anyhoo, thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a Christmas cheer hug!
rebekka xxx
Comment Written 26-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Rebekka, thank you!
Comment from flylikeaneagle
mystery penpal: great word choices as you witness to us about reading the word of God. We read and need and learn by the Word. We grow and transform. Merry Christmas. stars ************** flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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mystery penpal: great word choices as you witness to us about reading the word of God. We read and need and learn by the Word. We grow and transform. Merry Christmas. stars ************** flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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What a wonderful gift a day after Christmas, thank you so much!
Comment from Sugarray77
Oh, I love this Tyburn. It is cleverly presented and the theme is meaningful and thoughtful. One of the best I have read. I wish you much luck in the Tyburn contest.
Melissa
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Oh, I love this Tyburn. It is cleverly presented and the theme is meaningful and thoughtful. One of the best I have read. I wish you much luck in the Tyburn contest.
Melissa
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Tyburn Poetry contest.
Your rhyming words make for a smoothly reading verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Tyburn Poetry contest.
Your rhyming words make for a smoothly reading verse.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Thank you for the good wishes!
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, in addition to fully complying with the prompt, this write has a warm and altogether definitive message of faith and spiritual reference I find embracing in its message of bible counsel. I wish you the best in the contest with this liturgically rendered poem...
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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In my opinion, in addition to fully complying with the prompt, this write has a warm and altogether definitive message of faith and spiritual reference I find embracing in its message of bible counsel. I wish you the best in the contest with this liturgically rendered poem...
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2019
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Eve, thank you!
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You are very welcome indeed - thank you for sharing this very special work...Eve
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. Your message came through loud and clear. Kudos for the type of poem you selected. Very well done.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. Your message came through loud and clear. Kudos for the type of poem you selected. Very well done.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Sandra, thank you a very interesting Poetic style to work with.
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, this is a beautiful piece of work. very attractive and I liked the style of the poem and will try it out. Keep it up and I highly recommend your work to others.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Hi, this is a beautiful piece of work. very attractive and I liked the style of the poem and will try it out. Keep it up and I highly recommend your work to others.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Thank you, enjoy the process!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-A well written poem
with effective rhyming
words and imagery,
as well as correct syllable count.
-The concluding lines are
very good with a positive message
and use of the descriptive words, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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-Very nice image.
-A well written poem
with effective rhyming
words and imagery,
as well as correct syllable count.
-The concluding lines are
very good with a positive message
and use of the descriptive words, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Pam, thank you for your review! Merry Christmas...
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You are very welcome. Hope your Christmas was Merry, too!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Nice picture and interesting idea for a poem -reading, pleading, needing, wishing, feeling all powerful images that comes back to the scripture. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Nice picture and interesting idea for a poem -reading, pleading, needing, wishing, feeling all powerful images that comes back to the scripture. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2019
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Iza, thank you. Merry Christmas!