Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from QC Poet
I agree with your assessment, only I also feel to be stuck in such a situation, one has to rely on our self worth to pull ourselves out ~ a Will to help ourselves out of the mire of our surroundings. City or Country type settings only Add to the scenery of the soul.
Blessings.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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I agree with your assessment, only I also feel to be stuck in such a situation, one has to rely on our self worth to pull ourselves out ~ a Will to help ourselves out of the mire of our surroundings. City or Country type settings only Add to the scenery of the soul.
Blessings.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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gmartinez, thank you for your reflection from my collection contained within Muses from the heart
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is the saddest thing about poverty, you become invisible to others. It's getting better, there are people out there determined to help. Your poem is stark and to the point. Well done. :) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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That is the saddest thing about poverty, you become invisible to others. It's getting better, there are people out there determined to help. Your poem is stark and to the point. Well done. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 10-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Sandra, thank you for reading, reviewing and commenting on my poem!
Comment from Bobby Jo
My heart cries out within my soul of the darkness that surrounds this lonely world. May live abound. Prayers will be lifted up in the hope for the lost souls.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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My heart cries out within my soul of the darkness that surrounds this lonely world. May live abound. Prayers will be lifted up in the hope for the lost souls.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the review and comments!
Comment from jenintorre
This is a great poem. It is so typical of inner city areas in so many big towns.
You have really captured the atmosphere of this situation in your well penned words. The well chosen zrtwork is a perfect match. Take are. Jen.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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This is a great poem. It is so typical of inner city areas in so many big towns.
You have really captured the atmosphere of this situation in your well penned words. The well chosen zrtwork is a perfect match. Take are. Jen.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the review and comments!
Comment from Lulube
Fallen by the wayside. Life is surviving the day, everyday. You are right on the money with your descriptive imagery . Love your last line My take on it; Along with hand-out, help them with choices. some have no more desire to reach out for whats offered. Devastation is a slow killer.
great rhyming and awareness for those who do not see.
lulube
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Fallen by the wayside. Life is surviving the day, everyday. You are right on the money with your descriptive imagery . Love your last line My take on it; Along with hand-out, help them with choices. some have no more desire to reach out for whats offered. Devastation is a slow killer.
great rhyming and awareness for those who do not see.
lulube
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Lulube, th am so very humbled by your six-star review thanks so much!
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welcome
lulube
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I have read a few of these poems based on a picture. I couldn't write this type of poetry if I had a photo album. Your poem is the best I have read. Good work.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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I have read a few of these poems based on a picture. I couldn't write this type of poetry if I had a photo album. Your poem is the best I have read. Good work.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Thank you Thomas, b.t.w congratulations are your 2019 successes. Very impressive, indeed!
Comment from marinaluv
Stories of humanity are often times more eerie and unsettling than ghost stories and tales. Cities are jungles, and the people always have something to prove or someone to scare. This poem is a really thoughtful way to convey the anxieties of an onlooker who calls the city his home. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Stories of humanity are often times more eerie and unsettling than ghost stories and tales. Cities are jungles, and the people always have something to prove or someone to scare. This poem is a really thoughtful way to convey the anxieties of an onlooker who calls the city his home. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Marina, I can't thank you enough for reading and commenting on my work!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You captured the atmosphere of an uncaring city here where people are abandoned on the streets and danger lurks around every corner, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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You captured the atmosphere of an uncaring city here where people are abandoned on the streets and danger lurks around every corner, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Dolly thank you for your review!
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent rhymed couplets, J. All cities have the homeless living on their streets, but not all cities have quite the vivid loneliness of this one.
It seems like however much is done, it doesn't work, as the problem seems to be one we haven't got our finger on the pulse of yet.
Excellent ekphrastic poem and a fine addition to the PIX this Club.
Gloria
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Excellent rhymed couplets, J. All cities have the homeless living on their streets, but not all cities have quite the vivid loneliness of this one.
It seems like however much is done, it doesn't work, as the problem seems to be one we haven't got our finger on the pulse of yet.
Excellent ekphrastic poem and a fine addition to the PIX this Club.
Gloria
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Gloria, thank you. The problem,in my opinion, stems from government programs that seldom work and lack of programs to teach people to fish for themselves instead of be giving fish.
Comment from Mastery
Hi Jim. Happy New Year! This is a good take on life 's other side in other part of town. You have captured feelings very well here. Thanks for sharing and take care. : ) Bob
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Hi Jim. Happy New Year! This is a good take on life 's other side in other part of town. You have captured feelings very well here. Thanks for sharing and take care. : ) Bob
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Bob, my dear friend, I have been missing you for a while, glad to see you are back. I hope that you faring well! Thank you, as always, for the vote of recognition!
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Been enjoying time away, my friend. My new book will be released this week btw. :) Bob