Sharing the Planet
A Kyrielle for the young - and young at heart9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This kyrielle, Sharing the Planet, has the proper formatting, with repeating lines and finds the beauty that is everywhere in the garden.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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This kyrielle, Sharing the Planet, has the proper formatting, with repeating lines and finds the beauty that is everywhere in the garden.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your well-written poem. It flows well with a message of nature and I agree that we all can learn from nature's harmony. It's a good message and well-received with good rhymes and a good repeating sentence and artwork choice. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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I enjoyed reading your well-written poem. It flows well with a message of nature and I agree that we all can learn from nature's harmony. It's a good message and well-received with good rhymes and a good repeating sentence and artwork choice. Best wishes!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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I?m glad this piece resonated with you. We only have this one home. Let?s learn to share it.
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your kyrielle! And I love the repeated line, "From nature's harmony let's learn." I can just hear a teacher telling a young child to learn to take turns from the bees and the butterflies!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Great job with your kyrielle! And I love the repeated line, "From nature's harmony let's learn." I can just hear a teacher telling a young child to learn to take turns from the bees and the butterflies!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Yes, these are lessons we can easily teach our young ones. Thanks for dropping by to share your insights.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Kyrielle about sharing the planet in harmony with their animals and creatures in nature. See the beauty all around us daily is a good habit we can develop.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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A very well-written Kyrielle about sharing the planet in harmony with their animals and creatures in nature. See the beauty all around us daily is a good habit we can develop.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Kyrielle poem you have penned about sharing the planet. You used great descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Great job you did on this writing prompt. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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This is a very well written Kyrielle poem you have penned about sharing the planet. You used great descriptive words and very beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Great job you did on this writing prompt. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Thank you!
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you are so welcome!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet, hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Hello fellow poet, hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Thanks for the supportive feedback! Always appreciate your insights.
Comment from RodG
This Kyrielle should appeal especially to young readers as (1) it teaches a valuable lesson--learn from nature's harmony, and (2) it describes in simple language the birds taking flight, the koi fish blowing bubbles, and the bees and butterflies sharing the nectar of flowers. Rod
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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This Kyrielle should appeal especially to young readers as (1) it teaches a valuable lesson--learn from nature's harmony, and (2) it describes in simple language the birds taking flight, the koi fish blowing bubbles, and the bees and butterflies sharing the nectar of flowers. Rod
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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As a grandmother, I guess I just naturally want to appeal to the young - and young at heart. Thanks for the positive feedback. Always appreciate your insightful comments.
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My pleasure. Rod
Comment from Carl DeVere
Great meter mastering and rhyming. It's a sheer joy of expression that matches your theme. Let us all remember the big picture and that we are all in this world together.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Great meter mastering and rhyming. It's a sheer joy of expression that matches your theme. Let us all remember the big picture and that we are all in this world together.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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I?m so glad you got the gist of what I was thinking! Thanks for the positive feedback.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Excellent Kyrielle poem! You touch on the beauty of nature which so many fail to appreciate because they get so wrapped up in daily living! Our planet is vibrant and so full of an immense variety of life. More need to stop and smell the roses! xoxo
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Excellent Kyrielle poem! You touch on the beauty of nature which so many fail to appreciate because they get so wrapped up in daily living! Our planet is vibrant and so full of an immense variety of life. More need to stop and smell the roses! xoxo
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this kyrielle on nature. Always enjoy hearing your thoughts.