The Night's Embrace
Kyrielle Poem Contest Entry5 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This kyrielle, The Night's Embrace, has the proper formatting, with repeating lines and finds the firsts of a relationship occurring progressively beneath the moon.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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This kyrielle, The Night's Embrace, has the proper formatting, with repeating lines and finds the firsts of a relationship occurring progressively beneath the moon.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review and comments, Bill. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great weekend.
Ron
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your Kyrielle poem. It flows and rhymes well with a message of love and romance. Your repeating sentence is nice and I like how you repositioned it in each stanza. Nice artwork choice. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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I enjoyed reading your Kyrielle poem. It flows and rhymes well with a message of love and romance. Your repeating sentence is nice and I like how you repositioned it in each stanza. Nice artwork choice. Best wishes!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the kind review and generous stars, Angel123. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
Comment from May 1
This is such a beautiful, romantic poem. I think you managed to choose just the right words to paint a perfect picture and that's amazing. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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This is such a beautiful, romantic poem. I think you managed to choose just the right words to paint a perfect picture and that's amazing. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, May. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind words. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet, hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Hello fellow poet, hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review and stars, 13. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
Comment from RodG
I think readers of all ages will truly enjoy this romantic kyrielle as you set the scene so vividly and characterize the Speaker as one smitten by his dance partner. The moon and night definitely play the role of matchmaker here. The cadence almost mimics the tempo of the dance music and those soft S's throughout enhance the mood you're striving for. I truly enjoyed this! Rod
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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I think readers of all ages will truly enjoy this romantic kyrielle as you set the scene so vividly and characterize the Speaker as one smitten by his dance partner. The moon and night definitely play the role of matchmaker here. The cadence almost mimics the tempo of the dance music and those soft S's throughout enhance the mood you're striving for. I truly enjoyed this! Rod
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Rod. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have a great day.
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My pleasure. Rod