Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Indistinguishability"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from LyndaS
'Selfsameness' is a great descriptive word for this 20-letter word entry. Your syllable count is great and your lines formed a nice little teacup. Well done. Good luck in the booth. Lynda
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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'Selfsameness' is a great descriptive word for this 20-letter word entry. Your syllable count is great and your lines formed a nice little teacup. Well done. Good luck in the booth. Lynda
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Lynda, thank you for the validation.
Comment from Joan E.
Wow--a twenty-letter word to start a Teacup Dictionary Poem--now, that's a challenge! And you selected a wonderful, parallel artwork to accent it. And I admired your definition and the classic shape. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Wow--a twenty-letter word to start a Teacup Dictionary Poem--now, that's a challenge! And you selected a wonderful, parallel artwork to accent it. And I admired your definition and the classic shape. Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2020
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Joan, thanks for recognizing the depth of challenge
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Comment from Ogden
Excellent job on what I know to be a very difficult contest and choice of word. I, also, have written my entry using "indistinguishability."
Good luck to both of us!
Don
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Excellent job on what I know to be a very difficult contest and choice of word. I, also, have written my entry using "indistinguishability."
Good luck to both of us!
Don
Comment Written 17-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Thanks Don I?ll be sure to read it.
Comment from pharp
Excellent job in the penning of this 20 letter Teacup dictionary poem. I love the artwork chosen and the teacup is clearly shown. Thanks for sharing and the very best in the contest. Blessings....Portia
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Excellent job in the penning of this 20 letter Teacup dictionary poem. I love the artwork chosen and the teacup is clearly shown. Thanks for sharing and the very best in the contest. Blessings....Portia
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Portia thank you very much! Blessings back!
Comment from judelesemann
Well done. You have described oneness in a few descriptive verses and done it so colorfully. I know how challenging it can be to relay a thought in so few words. Again, Well done. Keep on writing.
Be blessed, Jude
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Well done. You have described oneness in a few descriptive verses and done it so colorfully. I know how challenging it can be to relay a thought in so few words. Again, Well done. Keep on writing.
Be blessed, Jude
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Jude, thanks much!
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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Leander, yes a poetry challenge!
Comment from karenina
Interesting form! I'd never heard of it before--it's intriguing and I'd like to try it if the muse will cooperate. I liked the concept of "mirror image"--as it called to mind times I've looked at my "identical self" in my reflection and wondered just who, in fact, I am...or are meant to be. Well done.--Karenina
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Interesting form! I'd never heard of it before--it's intriguing and I'd like to try it if the muse will cooperate. I liked the concept of "mirror image"--as it called to mind times I've looked at my "identical self" in my reflection and wondered just who, in fact, I am...or are meant to be. Well done.--Karenina
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Katenina, thanks very much for the review!
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Welcome! :)
Comment from Lulube
Looks like a fun style. Must try it! now to find a word. so it's 8-1 syllables than 8 syllables for last line? It does look like the shape of a teacup. good descriptive lines for the definition, tricky one, i must say
lulube
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Looks like a fun style. Must try it! now to find a word. so it's 8-1 syllables than 8 syllables for last line? It does look like the shape of a teacup. good descriptive lines for the definition, tricky one, i must say
lulube
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Lulube, wow! I thank you so much!
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welcome
lulube
Comment from Sugarray77
Excellent job on your choice of topics and words. Your entry is perfect and the colorful artwork is a real enhancement. I wish you much luck with this one, J...
Melissa
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Excellent job on your choice of topics and words. Your entry is perfect and the colorful artwork is a real enhancement. I wish you much luck with this one, J...
Melissa
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Melissa thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fun teacup poem and I liked the subject matter and the explanation here of identical things being indistinguishable! Much enjoyed, luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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A fun teacup poem and I liked the subject matter and the explanation here of identical things being indistinguishable! Much enjoyed, luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2020
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Thanks much Dolly!