Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

You have done an excellent job on this verse. I enjoyed reading it and think it flows very well through each line. Lovely presentation. Good luck in the contest.

Melissa

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020

Thank you very much. Your review means a great deal to me. Appreciate the good luck wish.

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Lips,
softer than velvet
and smoother than silk,
caressed mine the first time that we kissed.

Excellently done for the four line poem contest and simple to understand

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020

Thank you for the review. I greatly appreciate your comments.

Comment from Eve Vasa

Excellent

Hi, I love the title to this, it reminds me of my favorite painting by Gustav Klimt, called, 'the kiss'. I have a huge replica of it in my family room. His use of color is just wonderful.

I think this is a good entry for the four line poetry contest and best of luck. I noticed no errors and your description of 'a kiss' is very romantic.

Cheers, and thanks for sharing your writing; Eve.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020

Thank you very much. Your review with its comments are most helpful and encouraging.