Comment from scongrove

Exceptional

I love this! :) For some reason as I read along, I could hear Axel Rose's background music to the song November Rain. You did a fantastic job creating inspiring words with depth and emotion. I love the artwork you placed with your post too.

Great writing my friend. You are very talented!
Sincerely,
Shana :)

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020

You flatter and honor me with you words and six stars. I must point out to God as the one who put it into my mind. Still, i thank you for your comments.

reply by scongrove on 07-Feb-2020

You are very welcome! Enjoyed! :)

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this very descriptive poem with wonderful rhyme choices. A very personal and heart warming write. I would mention that this color of blue background is so dominant that it is hard to read the script. Just an observation.

Melissa

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2020

Thanks for letting me know about background. Will lighten it up.

Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

I like your creativity in expressing the truth of being able to see a greater depth in someone's eyes whom you deeply loved. I like how it is presented with the background that makes it appear to have more depth. Great job with the expressive writing. Bill

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2020

Thank you. Your comments are most appreciated. Your review has also been most helpful.