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Raspberry

a 3/5/3 poem for the daily prompt contest

9 total reviews 
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 Passion writing prompt.
This short verse is colorful and dripping with passion.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
    Hello, Sharon,

    Thank you very much for the lovely review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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These are sweet and endearing kisses shared with a loved one and this is truly a feeling I miss. Likening kisses to raspberries is sweet and romantic, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
    Thank you
Comment from angel123
Exceptional
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Wow! Great poem! You wrote an exceptional poem about passion. Your artwork choice really enhanced your message of kissing, I am sure you will do well in the contest. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
    Thank you very much
Comment from Mia Twysted
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I love the picture you have chosen to go with this piece. The two work very well together. The words leave a soft touch and taste on the lips that remind you of a passionate kiss.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    Thank you
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Quite a image and sensory description in this poem just in time for Valentine... Or maybe not, this reminds me of a Dracula momentš??? Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    LoL. Dracula? I like that. :)
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
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Very good, passionate piece of poetry. Very sensual. Your thoughts were right on target. I think you are a good candidate for this contest.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Thank you very much, my friend.
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
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Aww! Love and love! The poem speaks so much about love! The last line "as can be" however does not fit very well into this context. You may want to replace it with something else. Nevertheless, best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Thank you very much. I made a change. Hope is better.
reply by Precious Owuamalam on 15-Feb-2020
    Sure, dripping wet is much better. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment from Mr.write_4u
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I think this is a good job of putting everything together. The colors and the photo add to the poem, which is good by itself. It created an image in my head, I think that is always our goal. Good luck.
Happy writing,
Larry

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Thank you very much for the kind review.
Comment from tfawcus
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You have created a luscious image here. It's no wonder that fruits play such a large part in the lexicon of sensual metaphor! Nicely done. Interesting musical accompaniment, too.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Thank you very much for the kind review.