Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Passion"Musings of an old man -2020
22 total reviews
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
I love your 3-5-3 Passion poem! It is perfectly written and I love it's flow and pace! I also love your last line: "in love's grasp!"
My best,
Deborah
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Dear Author,
I love your 3-5-3 Passion poem! It is perfectly written and I love it's flow and pace! I also love your last line: "in love's grasp!"
My best,
Deborah
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thanks Deborah, it didn't judge well, but I am glad you enjoyed it as much as I did.
Comment from Mr.write_4u
I really like this one for the contest. Everything works together, the color scheme, the picture, and of course the poem. I like how each of those lines can stand alone, yet mesh perfectly together. Good luck, thank you for sharing.
Happy writing,
Larry
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I really like this one for the contest. Everything works together, the color scheme, the picture, and of course the poem. I like how each of those lines can stand alone, yet mesh perfectly together. Good luck, thank you for sharing.
Happy writing,
Larry
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Larry, I am grateful for the strong validation.
Comment from karenina
I think this may be the first time I've awarded a six to a three line poem...
Congratulations on combining the perfect image with the perfect words to make me say "So true" right out loud!--Karenina
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I think this may be the first time I've awarded a six to a three line poem...
Congratulations on combining the perfect image with the perfect words to make me say "So true" right out loud!--Karenina
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Karenina, I am especially grateful for your six-star validation in light of fact this poem really resonated for you. Always my goal in my writing.
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Resonated it DID! Happy to award six stars!--Karenina
Comment from Bicpen
Excellent impetuously it has a sound which even makes me feel like I should be squirming it is a delight and a neat little number all the best for the competition.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Excellent impetuously it has a sound which even makes me feel like I should be squirming it is a delight and a neat little number all the best for the competition.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Bicpen, thank you! I value your thoughtful comments.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this poetic, vividly descriptive definition of "passion"--which can be all-consuming, for good or bad.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this poetic, vividly descriptive definition of "passion"--which can be all-consuming, for good or bad.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Janice, I do thank you!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Passion", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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"Passion", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Duchess, thank you. I am always grateful for the recognition and validation.
Comment from Mia Twysted
Passion does bring you. It takes hold and moves you through with and without your permission. It leads you down a path to find love. That is the message I take away from this.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Passion does bring you. It takes hold and moves you through with and without your permission. It leads you down a path to find love. That is the message I take away from this.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Mia, thank you. I am always grateful for the recognition and validation.
Comment from Susan Larson
Wow! The picture you chose to accompany your poem certainly draws me in to be bound impetuously in love's grasp. So, which came first? The picture or the poem?
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Wow! The picture you chose to accompany your poem certainly draws me in to be bound impetuously in love's grasp. So, which came first? The picture or the poem?
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Susan, thank you!
Comment from Shirley McLain
I love your poem and you have set it off so nicely with your picture. I did not find any errors so now I'm typing just to fill space. You did an excellent job. Shirley
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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I love your poem and you have set it off so nicely with your picture. I did not find any errors so now I'm typing just to fill space. You did an excellent job. Shirley
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Shirley, thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match Your words captured my attention and my inner feeling from the first line to the last.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match Your words captured my attention and my inner feeling from the first line to the last.
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Cookie, I am very honored by your six-star review!
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you earned it.
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