Absent No More
A lovers' reunion is a whole-body experience...13 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Absent No More, has the right set up and finds that the fuse and the flame will find each other and will set the welcome wagon ablaze -- and rocking.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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This 3-5-3, Absent No More, has the right set up and finds that the fuse and the flame will find each other and will set the welcome wagon ablaze -- and rocking.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much for your review on this one, Bill -- always good to hear from you! ;)
Comment from JP Writer
Very well done! The verbal images of hearts feasting and flesh igniting fireworks didn't even need the painting above the words to get your idea across.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Very well done! The verbal images of hearts feasting and flesh igniting fireworks didn't even need the painting above the words to get your idea across.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your review on this one, Jayne -- much appreciated! ;) Yvette
Comment from May 1
Wow, I can't stop admiring how wonderfully you can do these short poems. It's like you magically choose just the right words to use. I really enjoyed reading this and the image is so cool.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Wow, I can't stop admiring how wonderfully you can do these short poems. It's like you magically choose just the right words to use. I really enjoyed reading this and the image is so cool.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review!!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 Passion writing prompt.
This short verse talks of a returning lover.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 Passion writing prompt.
This short verse talks of a returning lover.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Minglement
Ah, this is an intriguing entry for the 3-5-3 Passion Poem contest. I really your presentation and enjoyed the twist at the end, though I should have seen it coming :) I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Ah, this is an intriguing entry for the 3-5-3 Passion Poem contest. I really your presentation and enjoyed the twist at the end, though I should have seen it coming :) I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thanks so very much!
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You're most welcome.
Comment from angel123
Your poem is very hot with passion and desire. It is well written and your artwork choice enhances your message. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Your poem is very hot with passion and desire. It is well written and your artwork choice enhances your message. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thanks so very much!
Comment from Mia Twysted
Absent No More is a wonderful piece. It speaks to me of longing that is come to an end and now after waiting and riding it out, they can finally be together.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Absent No More is a wonderful piece. It speaks to me of longing that is come to an end and now after waiting and riding it out, they can finally be together.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review!
Comment from moongirlwriter
This is my kinda poem. . .short and sweet and filled with passion. Nice job. I also love the artwork. . .so beautiful. Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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This is my kinda poem. . .short and sweet and filled with passion. Nice job. I also love the artwork. . .so beautiful. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Thanks so very much!
Comment from Mr.write_4u
I like this one. It creates a visual for the reader. The word firework just had me searching online and reading for 20 minutes about whether it is 2 or 3 syllables. Apparently both. Now, that's one of those useless pieces of information I'll probably never forget. Thanks for the read and for sharing. Good luck.
Happy writing,
Larry
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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I like this one. It creates a visual for the reader. The word firework just had me searching online and reading for 20 minutes about whether it is 2 or 3 syllables. Apparently both. Now, that's one of those useless pieces of information I'll probably never forget. Thanks for the read and for sharing. Good luck.
Happy writing,
Larry
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Glad to have sent you on an information hunt this morning, Larry -- now if I could only instill the same sense of curiosity in my students on a regular basis - LOL! Thank you for the review, sir!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Lover wishes not to wait any more, lover thinks of love's excitement and wants reunion of love; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Lover wishes not to wait any more, lover thinks of love's excitement and wants reunion of love; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Many thanks!