Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Janetsue
This is a beautiful etheree/reverse etheree combination with a lot of heart. Having a Soul Friend is a wonderful gift, especially for having someone who shares your feelings about our loving God.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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This is a beautiful etheree/reverse etheree combination with a lot of heart. Having a Soul Friend is a wonderful gift, especially for having someone who shares your feelings about our loving God.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Spangle, thank you very much for your kind validation.
Comment from royowen
These etheree poems were in constant use sometime ago, but one doesn't see them so much, although the nonet has made a real comeback, a beautifully written etheree Jim. There's nothing like a real friend, I've got the best in my wife, well done, Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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These etheree poems were in constant use sometime ago, but one doesn't see them so much, although the nonet has made a real comeback, a beautifully written etheree Jim. There's nothing like a real friend, I've got the best in my wife, well done, Blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Roy, in that regard we are both the most fortunate of men, our soulmates ~ life would be far less complete with them...
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Amen
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello JLR, what a lovely, very emotional Etheree Double. You have introduced me to a new word(s) - Anam Cara. Thank you. This is a lovely read and I enjoyed it very much. The picture is most suitable for your words. Oh how the hands reveal the ageing process. Lovely work. Regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Hello JLR, what a lovely, very emotional Etheree Double. You have introduced me to a new word(s) - Anam Cara. Thank you. This is a lovely read and I enjoyed it very much. The picture is most suitable for your words. Oh how the hands reveal the ageing process. Lovely work. Regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Dorothy, your kind words are very appreciated. Thank you!
Comment from Alchera
What a beautiful, felt Soul Friend you are and how solely your whispering words come deeply from your inner soul for such a dear friend of yours. I have never tried such poetical technique but maybe one I will. Great work and I did like it!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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What a beautiful, felt Soul Friend you are and how solely your whispering words come deeply from your inner soul for such a dear friend of yours. I have never tried such poetical technique but maybe one I will. Great work and I did like it!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Thank you for reviewing and commenting.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem tells the story of a true friend for one who desperately needs a shoulder to cry on or just to be there with him/her in their time of need. Your formatting works well. I like how the lines grow then reduce as per the style. It is like the ebb and flow of life. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Your poem tells the story of a true friend for one who desperately needs a shoulder to cry on or just to be there with him/her in their time of need. Your formatting works well. I like how the lines grow then reduce as per the style. It is like the ebb and flow of life. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Jan, thank you.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very nicely composed double Etheree poem, illustrated well. Hopefully, we are all lucky enough to have that special friend who is with us through thick and thin. Marilyn
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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This is a very nicely composed double Etheree poem, illustrated well. Hopefully, we are all lucky enough to have that special friend who is with us through thick and thin. Marilyn
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Marilyn, thank you!
Comment from Raul1
Just the poem I needed to be and feel at peace with myself. This is a wonderful poem. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Just the poem I needed to be and feel at peace with myself. This is a wonderful poem. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Raul,, thank you!
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You're welcome
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, I enjoyed reading your double Etheree poem. I can't say I'm familiar with the form. I'm a prose writer, occasionally trying my hand on some short forms. I really like your poem and its rhythm. All best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Hi there, I enjoyed reading your double Etheree poem. I can't say I'm familiar with the form. I'm a prose writer, occasionally trying my hand on some short forms. I really like your poem and its rhythm. All best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2020
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Ulla, thank you.
Comment from papa55mike
May we all rest in the love of our Savior. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the form. Best of luck with your writing!
Please pray for Nashville!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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May we all rest in the love of our Savior. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the form. Best of luck with your writing!
Please pray for Nashville!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Mike, my friend, thank you!
Comment from Sanku
This is a double ethiree, one reverse. A deeply felt tribute that causes one's eyes to moisten.Most of us have someone like that.in the second ten syllable line,is the word 'salve' two syllabled?
whatever be the syllable count ,it was a pleasure to read this heart felt out pouring.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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This is a double ethiree, one reverse. A deeply felt tribute that causes one's eyes to moisten.Most of us have someone like that.in the second ten syllable line,is the word 'salve' two syllabled?
whatever be the syllable count ,it was a pleasure to read this heart felt out pouring.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Sanku, thank you. I will double check salve.