Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely topic you've chosen for this free verse challenge JLR and an apt tribute to those out in front fighting for all of us in this Corona Virus pandemic.
We are in this together and together
we will either sparkle or sizzle - lovely lines.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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A lovely topic you've chosen for this free verse challenge JLR and an apt tribute to those out in front fighting for all of us in this Corona Virus pandemic.
We are in this together and together
we will either sparkle or sizzle - lovely lines.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Valda, thank you, champion on!
Comment from Badger_29
An outstanding example of free verse and a wonderful commentary on the current times. I love how are your poetry shines the form, Ryan, meter and flow are impeccable. A wonderful tribute can people who use their let their light of their Halo shine on us all excellently and, I see no room for improvement.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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An outstanding example of free verse and a wonderful commentary on the current times. I love how are your poetry shines the form, Ryan, meter and flow are impeccable. A wonderful tribute can people who use their let their light of their Halo shine on us all excellently and, I see no room for improvement.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Darren, I am so privileged to garner the wonderful validation of your words. Be safe, be very, very safe!
Comment from Ulla
Yes, and what a good idea. After two weeks confined in my house and at least another 3 weeks to look forward to in isolation, I need all the distraction I can get. All best. Ulla;)))
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Yes, and what a good idea. After two weeks confined in my house and at least another 3 weeks to look forward to in isolation, I need all the distraction I can get. All best. Ulla;)))
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Ulla, I pray that you can be in nature in her fulet glory this weekend, We very safe and stay very well!
Comment from Maureen Sky
Really lovely poem and creative work of art! Yes, we are in such challenging times and we all need to take a long look in the mirror and ask ourselves if we are doing enough for the good of mankind? I pray each and every day that a miracle happens and a vaccine or cure will show its' face soon. Good job here!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Really lovely poem and creative work of art! Yes, we are in such challenging times and we all need to take a long look in the mirror and ask ourselves if we are doing enough for the good of mankind? I pray each and every day that a miracle happens and a vaccine or cure will show its' face soon. Good job here!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Maureen, thank you! I pray that when we come out the other side of these dark days mankind can walk just a litter more peacefully, a little moe kinder a little more personally responsible and a whole lot closer to our Divine maker.
Comment from Sandtana Kay
This virus has us all on edge but God will take care of His children.
We need to help one another and pray it will all end soon. I like the
picture you choose for your writing.
Sandtana Kay
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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This virus has us all on edge but God will take care of His children.
We need to help one another and pray it will all end soon. I like the
picture you choose for your writing.
Sandtana Kay
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Kay, we do and I think generally we are across the globe. Now is the time, if ever there were a time this should be.
Comment from Gail Denham
Amen - agreed - absolutely - look around, find ways to help - pray a lot - all day long - for our country, our president, the ones who are out of a job and soon can't feed their families - the self-less workers in hospitals. So many fine people God bless them
Good poem
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Amen - agreed - absolutely - look around, find ways to help - pray a lot - all day long - for our country, our president, the ones who are out of a job and soon can't feed their families - the self-less workers in hospitals. So many fine people God bless them
Good poem
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Gail, thank you so much Have a great weekend!
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are heartfelt, clear, creative and thought provoking.
The reader pondered on the words and theme of this poem. The last
stanza is just beautiful and made me ask myself "what else can
I do for others during this difficult time?". The artwork goes well with this poem. May you be well and safe.....
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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The author's words are heartfelt, clear, creative and thought provoking.
The reader pondered on the words and theme of this poem. The last
stanza is just beautiful and made me ask myself "what else can
I do for others during this difficult time?". The artwork goes well with this poem. May you be well and safe.....
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Harmony, I delight that my poem resonated with you , please take care,be well, be very well!
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent free verse tribute to those valiant people working on the front lines caring for the people stricken and sick. I am sure they are more appreciated by everyone and even much more than they will ever know. I really have no idea how they keep going on with such dedication and caring.
A most enjoyable read, J and many thanks for sharing.
Gloria
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Excellent free verse tribute to those valiant people working on the front lines caring for the people stricken and sick. I am sure they are more appreciated by everyone and even much more than they will ever know. I really have no idea how they keep going on with such dedication and caring.
A most enjoyable read, J and many thanks for sharing.
Gloria
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Gloria, thank you, I delight that my poem resonated with you , please take care,be well, be very well!
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello JLR,
Lovely as well as timely piece of Spiritual Poetry having impressive phraseology, smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end depicting a laudable message!
3rd stanza and these lines are particularly noteworthy:
"We are in this together and together
we will either sparkle or sizzle;
do we do our part for all of mankind?"
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Hello JLR,
Lovely as well as timely piece of Spiritual Poetry having impressive phraseology, smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end depicting a laudable message!
3rd stanza and these lines are particularly noteworthy:
"We are in this together and together
we will either sparkle or sizzle;
do we do our part for all of mankind?"
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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I delight that my poem resonated with you , please take care,be well, be very well!
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JLR, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, you have commended us all- those who are doing, trying, and working for the right outcome, with the guidance of our father we shall succeed, beautifully written and presented, thank you for sharing****kahpot
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Excellent, you have commended us all- those who are doing, trying, and working for the right outcome, with the guidance of our father we shall succeed, beautifully written and presented, thank you for sharing****kahpot
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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kahpot, I delight that my poem resonated with you , please take care,be well, be very well!