Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Capture that Silver Lining"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from A. Willow Bends
First, I appreciate your author notes. Always much to be learned there. This is very well written and my favorite part, the strength words I find in this are "evermore united". Great choice! I regret not having a six. The visual chosen is perfect. Wonderful job. The overall effect is amazing.
Wendy
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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First, I appreciate your author notes. Always much to be learned there. This is very well written and my favorite part, the strength words I find in this are "evermore united". Great choice! I regret not having a six. The visual chosen is perfect. Wonderful job. The overall effect is amazing.
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Wendy, I am so very appreciative of your validating comments. I pray you remain very, very well!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
America needs to return to God in all she says and does, so we can "under God grow" into a once again powerful and godly nation. We've lost our focus too long.
Well written!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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America needs to return to God in all she says and does, so we can "under God grow" into a once again powerful and godly nation. We've lost our focus too long.
Well written!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Rebecca, I pray that when we come out the other side of these dark days mankind can walk just a litter more peacefully, a little kinder a little more personally responsible and a whole lot closer to our Divine maker.
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That's my prayer!
Comment from Sandtana Kay
Your poem was very timely. Hopefully, this will be a wakeup
call to those who choose to bury their head in the sand. These
events were predicted in the last book of the Bible, Revelations.
Sandtana Kay
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Your poem was very timely. Hopefully, this will be a wakeup
call to those who choose to bury their head in the sand. These
events were predicted in the last book of the Bible, Revelations.
Sandtana Kay
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Kay, thank you fro your reflection on this poem.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this. The end of this sums up the whole matter though. We've got to look up continually realizing and knowing that he'll keep us going. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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I like this. The end of this sums up the whole matter though. We've got to look up continually realizing and knowing that he'll keep us going. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Jeffrey, my friend! I pray that when we come out the other side of these dark days mankind can walk just a little more peacefully, a little kinder a little more personally responsible and a whole lot closer to their Divine maker.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Hopefully, soon social distancing will be over and we can get on with our daily activities. I have noticed that when I do venture out, people are more friendly and glad to see someone else. Maybe after this is behind us people will continue down this path.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Hopefully, soon social distancing will be over and we can get on with our daily activities. I have noticed that when I do venture out, people are more friendly and glad to see someone else. Maybe after this is behind us people will continue down this path.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Thomas, I pray that when we come out the other side of these dark days mankind can walk just a little more peacefully, a little more kinder a little more personally responsible and whole lot more closer to their Divine maker.
Comment from Gail Denham
Well done for this new form - with a great message. I like the phrase "shine, not sizzle" - this is so true of the fear - but we have the opportunity to remind folks of God's love - of the sacrifice of Jesus on the cross - on the hope that God gives
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Well done for this new form - with a great message. I like the phrase "shine, not sizzle" - this is so true of the fear - but we have the opportunity to remind folks of God's love - of the sacrifice of Jesus on the cross - on the hope that God gives
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Gail, thank you so much Have a great weekend!
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem gives hope for the future. Maybe we will be more careful of our health and the health of others. And, maybe, be a more friendly, accepting and giving world after this pandemic ends.
I like the pun for viral with internet inference and metaphor. It seems to be spreading just as fast as something gone viral on the net
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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This poem gives hope for the future. Maybe we will be more careful of our health and the health of others. And, maybe, be a more friendly, accepting and giving world after this pandemic ends.
I like the pun for viral with internet inference and metaphor. It seems to be spreading just as fast as something gone viral on the net
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Joan, thank you!
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You're welcome.
Joan
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
It's a nice piece of Spiritual Poetry having impressive wording, and beautifully depicting the worth following message.
Impressive and perfectly matching the theme phraseology.
Smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme.
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Best of Luck!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Hello Friend,
It's a nice piece of Spiritual Poetry having impressive wording, and beautifully depicting the worth following message.
Impressive and perfectly matching the theme phraseology.
Smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme.
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Best of Luck!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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I am grateful for your kind review,
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JLR, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Raul1
I like the message that you sent to Fanstory. It is very positive. God wants us all healthy. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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I like the message that you sent to Fanstory. It is very positive. God wants us all healthy. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Raul thanks much@
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You're welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for introducing us to this trolaan form! I also like your calm and calming message in these well rhymed quatrains. Yes, we can rest and seek God's plan because "Evermore united, under God we'll grow."
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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Thank you for introducing us to this trolaan form! I also like your calm and calming message in these well rhymed quatrains. Yes, we can rest and seek God's plan because "Evermore united, under God we'll grow."
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2020
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lyenochka, thank you! I delight that my poem resonated with you , please take care,be well, be very well!