It's twenty twenty
5/7/5 poem6 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your prize! Clever play on 20/20 vision--rather, the lack thereof, hence devoid of reason as you say Missed this release--glad I caught-up. Cheers LIZ
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Congrats on your prize! Clever play on 20/20 vision--rather, the lack thereof, hence devoid of reason as you say Missed this release--glad I caught-up. Cheers LIZ
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Hi Liz, thank you for your visit and the thoughtful comments; please be safe.
Comment from juliaSjames
Superb social commentary in this 5-7-5 write, Ameen. Clever sustained metaphor with the double meaning of twenty twenty. This pandemic like other natural disasters is a great leveler. Hopefully it will bring us to our senses so that we make good use of the resources God has given us.
Good luck in the contest.
Stay safe and healthy and blessed my friend.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Superb social commentary in this 5-7-5 write, Ameen. Clever sustained metaphor with the double meaning of twenty twenty. This pandemic like other natural disasters is a great leveler. Hopefully it will bring us to our senses so that we make good use of the resources God has given us.
Good luck in the contest.
Stay safe and healthy and blessed my friend.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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My friend, thank you again; I am highly appreciative and encouraged by your wonderful review.
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Always a pleasure to review your work. Stay safe and healthy and blessed.
Julia
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Always a pleasure to review your work. Stay safe and healthy and blessed.
Julia
Comment from Joan E.
Unfortunately, our current reactions to the pandemic prove how myopic we are. Your 5-7-5 sadly summarizes our complete lack of vision. Best wishes in the contest and for future clarity- Joan
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Unfortunately, our current reactions to the pandemic prove how myopic we are. Your 5-7-5 sadly summarizes our complete lack of vision. Best wishes in the contest and for future clarity- Joan
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Joan my friend, I thank you for your time and the wonderful review; please be safe.
Comment from Gloria ....
Well we tried, but it's not an easy thing this reasoning stuff. It's a lot more complicated than anyone knew.
Excellent thought provoking entry into the contest Kamran and I wish you much luck with the committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Well we tried, but it's not an easy thing this reasoning stuff. It's a lot more complicated than anyone knew.
Excellent thought provoking entry into the contest Kamran and I wish you much luck with the committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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I agree my friend, not easy to reason and reflect; glad you stopped by; appreciate your time and the great review; thank you and please be safe.
Comment from LisaMay
I like how in your poem you have made a connection between our current year and the standard for measuring vision - then pointing out that mankind lacks vision and reason, sadly all too true.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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I like how in your poem you have made a connection between our current year and the standard for measuring vision - then pointing out that mankind lacks vision and reason, sadly all too true.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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LisaMay my friend, I thank you for the visit and am glad that you like the write; please be safe.
Comment from sunnilicious
I think this pandemic is forcing plenty people to see clearly. The irony of the year to vision. Exceptionally written work. Well thought out. Clearly and creatively written. Also, you met the syllable count requirements. Good luck. God bless you :)
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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I think this pandemic is forcing plenty people to see clearly. The irony of the year to vision. Exceptionally written work. Well thought out. Clearly and creatively written. Also, you met the syllable count requirements. Good luck. God bless you :)
Comment Written 24-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2020
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Hello sunnilicious, my friend thank you for the wonderful review, please be safe.