Concupiscence
Found it2 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was the start, of what could be, a wonderful novel. So much in this short piece that is full of secrecy, intrigue and much more. I've got a feeling Earl is going to do something to sort out his illegitimate son's future. Well done, you did a great job with this one. Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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That was the start, of what could be, a wonderful novel. So much in this short piece that is full of secrecy, intrigue and much more. I've got a feeling Earl is going to do something to sort out his illegitimate son's future. Well done, you did a great job with this one. Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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A most encouraging review zanya
Comment from January L'Angelle
I liked the story very much. The way everything came full circle (with his own son) for Edward was great! What was the "Found it" that you refer to? I wasn't quite sure. That was the prompt. I thought for a moment that he would find the letter that his mother hid but that wasn't it... was it? Respectfully, -January L.
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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I liked the story very much. The way everything came full circle (with his own son) for Edward was great! What was the "Found it" that you refer to? I wasn't quite sure. That was the prompt. I thought for a moment that he would find the letter that his mother hid but that wasn't it... was it? Respectfully, -January L.
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Thanks for reading zanya