Carl17820
humanity seeks to save itself at any cost6 total reviews
Comment from rhymelord
Shawn,
Brilliant, quite brilliant from the introduction of the emotion sensitive robot to the denouement when the programming kicks to denounce the miscreant. Reminds me of he work of Asimov and Heinlin. I look forward to more.
Regards
Reg
ps I very seldom read prose, but I'm glad I read this one.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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Shawn,
Brilliant, quite brilliant from the introduction of the emotion sensitive robot to the denouement when the programming kicks to denounce the miscreant. Reminds me of he work of Asimov and Heinlin. I look forward to more.
Regards
Reg
ps I very seldom read prose, but I'm glad I read this one.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for your review. That is the greatest compliment to my writing i have ever gotten. I'm glad that you enjoyed the story
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your win! I missed this release--glad I caught up. This is an intriguing story--an original!--very well told; I liked the wry humor: e.g. ...under favorable circumstances; this wasn't one...Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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Congrats on your win! I missed this release--glad I caught up. This is an intriguing story--an original!--very well told; I liked the wry humor: e.g. ...under favorable circumstances; this wasn't one...Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2020
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Thank you for the review
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
As a sci-fi fan (and Trekkie) and I have to tell you how much I enjoyed this! Also, to say congratulations on your contest win. This was well deserved. I'd love to read more from you.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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As a sci-fi fan (and Trekkie) and I have to tell you how much I enjoyed this! Also, to say congratulations on your contest win. This was well deserved. I'd love to read more from you.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thank you for the kind comments! If you're able to, check out my portfolio/bookcase!
Thanks again
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I sure will!!!
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 02-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Mary Furlong
This is absolutely amazing. Science fiction is not my favorite genre, but this story is so compelling and interesting that it easily overcame my initial reluctance to read. Wonderful. The best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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This is absolutely amazing. Science fiction is not my favorite genre, but this story is so compelling and interesting that it easily overcame my initial reluctance to read. Wonderful. The best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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Thank you for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it 😊
Comment from Kenneth Gagne
I love how the descriptions and behaviors in the initial paragraphs give you the impression that Twenty is human, only for it to be revealed otherwise when Tamara notices him. The conversation between them doesn't seem like one that lasts 75 minutes (the difference between the boarding estimate at the beginning and the exact number at the end), which I credit to how engaging it was to read. I got a sense of foreboding with the last sentence regarding the future of New Earth. I suppose history is doomed to be repeated.
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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I love how the descriptions and behaviors in the initial paragraphs give you the impression that Twenty is human, only for it to be revealed otherwise when Tamara notices him. The conversation between them doesn't seem like one that lasts 75 minutes (the difference between the boarding estimate at the beginning and the exact number at the end), which I credit to how engaging it was to read. I got a sense of foreboding with the last sentence regarding the future of New Earth. I suppose history is doomed to be repeated.
Comment Written 25-May-2020
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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Thank you for the review.