Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Craigitar
I share your rage against those who so mindlessly and blindly rage against the place that gave them more than they would likely have gotten anywhere else earth. Great poem/battle-cry!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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I share your rage against those who so mindlessly and blindly rage against the place that gave them more than they would likely have gotten anywhere else earth. Great poem/battle-cry!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much, delight in your weekend
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Although I prefer rhyming poetry, I agree with your post. We have allowed
a minority to take control of the majority. If Biden is elected, it won't take long for people to see they made an unrepairable mistake. We will never be able to get the country back. Very good post. Read my most recent poem "America What Happened." I believe we are on the same page.
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Although I prefer rhyming poetry, I agree with your post. We have allowed
a minority to take control of the majority. If Biden is elected, it won't take long for people to see they made an unrepairable mistake. We will never be able to get the country back. Very good post. Read my most recent poem "America What Happened." I believe we are on the same page.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Willie yes we are smack dab together on this, thanks for the six-stars!
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent job on your poem! Yes, America needs to stand these days like no other;-)
I would consider changing the background color otherwise it seems so cold.
Well written and thank you so much for sharing;-)
Many blessings to you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Excellent job on your poem! Yes, America needs to stand these days like no other;-)
I would consider changing the background color otherwise it seems so cold.
Well written and thank you so much for sharing;-)
Many blessings to you and your family;-)
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Thanks much!
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Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Tattered But Not Done", is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. With craft and skill, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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"Tattered But Not Done", is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. With craft and skill, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much, delight in your weekend
Comment from Alchera
"I hate America, I hate you, I hate."
"We don't want the freedom you died for. We want
to tear down everything including history;"
These are my favorite, we must get angry if for a minor group of people everything still goes wrong and our governors don't take their responsibility. Great work JLR!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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"I hate America, I hate you, I hate."
"We don't want the freedom you died for. We want
to tear down everything including history;"
These are my favorite, we must get angry if for a minor group of people everything still goes wrong and our governors don't take their responsibility. Great work JLR!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2020
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Tony, thank very much sad, times.
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We hope to survive! Take care!
Blessings! Tony
Comment from Zue65
I do understand the sentiment in this poem. I don't believe however in burning down cities to drive home a point. Violence should never be justified in the expression of one's sentiments. Law and order should always be honored in a civilized society. An excellent write, thanks for sharing your insights to the readers. God bless.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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I do understand the sentiment in this poem. I don't believe however in burning down cities to drive home a point. Violence should never be justified in the expression of one's sentiments. Law and order should always be honored in a civilized society. An excellent write, thanks for sharing your insights to the readers. God bless.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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Thank you for reviewing and comments. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-line poem, Tattered but Not Done, has the correct line count and witnesses a society at war with its soul. We will go on from here changed somehow, hopefully for the better.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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This twenty-line poem, Tattered but Not Done, has the correct line count and witnesses a society at war with its soul. We will go on from here changed somehow, hopefully for the better.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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Thank you for reviewing and comments. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a wonderful poem of tribute to our nation. Powerful and well written in 20 lines. Excellent descriptive words to lift us up.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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This is a wonderful poem of tribute to our nation. Powerful and well written in 20 lines. Excellent descriptive words to lift us up.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 26-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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Janet, thank you a lot, have a great weekend,
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Blessings, and thank you for this great 20 Line entry. I agree, and believe most Americans agree whole heatedly with what you state in this great poem. We should stand for what was fought and died for, paid for by the blood of of our true Patriots. If we don't stand and speak up, we cheapen all that they did and all America stands for. The public school system and Universities have failed us greatly in that they have not taught our youth America's beautiful History but have only focused on the bad. Sadly, today we are seeing the results. God help us!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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Blessings, and thank you for this great 20 Line entry. I agree, and believe most Americans agree whole heatedly with what you state in this great poem. We should stand for what was fought and died for, paid for by the blood of of our true Patriots. If we don't stand and speak up, we cheapen all that they did and all America stands for. The public school system and Universities have failed us greatly in that they have not taught our youth America's beautiful History but have only focused on the bad. Sadly, today we are seeing the results. God help us!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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Frank thank you! We must get a handle on this before we simply slip to far from our founders guidelines, I constantly pray for LEADERSHIP to rise like a Phoenix from our ashes.
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I join in your prayer.
Comment from ameen786
Wonderful reflections upon the challenging times we are going through and yes, sometimes actions are devoid of reason, I guess, there's too much freedom that should be curtailed. Great presentation in simple and meaningful words with a perfect picture. Thanks you.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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Wonderful reflections upon the challenging times we are going through and yes, sometimes actions are devoid of reason, I guess, there's too much freedom that should be curtailed. Great presentation in simple and meaningful words with a perfect picture. Thanks you.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2020
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ameen786, thanks!