Party Pooper
Covid to blame again7 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Okay - so, maybe it's time to stop making excuses for hitting the bottle and just going straight to hitting it! ;) An offering that has those subtle undertones of the suffering many endure in isolation... Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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LOL!! Okay - so, maybe it's time to stop making excuses for hitting the bottle and just going straight to hitting it! ;) An offering that has those subtle undertones of the suffering many endure in isolation... Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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haha thank you. I just popped open a bottlenif beer as I raise my glass to you.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an interesting paradoxical piece for the contest
that many will relate to in these pandemic times.
A bit more like prose than poetry, but free style could mean anything.
Interesting art work to match.
Good luck in the voting.
Robert
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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You've written an interesting paradoxical piece for the contest
that many will relate to in these pandemic times.
A bit more like prose than poetry, but free style could mean anything.
Interesting art work to match.
Good luck in the voting.
Robert
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Thank you Robert for your review. Free Style it is described in the rules so I was inclined to write in prose. I had a change of heart and rearranged and added words to try to represent it in verse.
Comment from Cindy Warren
Yeah, covid is driving a lot of people a little nuts. I thought it was safe to snuggle with my cat, but now I hear they can get it too. I'm going to take my chances, tho. She's not going to miss out on any snuggles. Love the picture. That cat looks really pissed off. Wonder if she's missing her snuggles.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Yeah, covid is driving a lot of people a little nuts. I thought it was safe to snuggle with my cat, but now I hear they can get it too. I'm going to take my chances, tho. She's not going to miss out on any snuggles. Love the picture. That cat looks really pissed off. Wonder if she's missing her snuggles.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Haha yes never stop loving your cat otherwise they will find a way to get even. Lol
Comment from Peer Ynt
The title hooked me instantly, but the verses lack the oomph. Or perhaps it just didn't met my expectations after reading the intro because I was expecting some heated debate or argument with the phantom of Covid or something like that. Disappointed.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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The title hooked me instantly, but the verses lack the oomph. Or perhaps it just didn't met my expectations after reading the intro because I was expecting some heated debate or argument with the phantom of Covid or something like that. Disappointed.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020
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Go away@
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me smile and I loved the humour here, amid all the chaos and the death, if we can keep a sense of humour then this may see us through, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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This made me smile and I loved the humour here, amid all the chaos and the death, if we can keep a sense of humour then this may see us through, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Haha Thank you Dolly.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, you paint the suffering well, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it although it is serious at the same time. The isolation, can and has, and still is causing many health issues among all of us. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Haha, you paint the suffering well, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it although it is serious at the same time. The isolation, can and has, and still is causing many health issues among all of us. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
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Haha thank you Jan.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I didn't get this poem. I felt like it didn't read as a poem. It was just four sentences that were sort of disjointed. I think it was an attempt at humor, but it fell flat for me. That's a 'home office party' for one thing?
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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I didn't get this poem. I felt like it didn't read as a poem. It was just four sentences that were sort of disjointed. I think it was an attempt at humor, but it fell flat for me. That's a 'home office party' for one thing?
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Thank you Amanda for being a real 'party pooper'.👍🍾😂