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Dawn

one line poetry

2 total reviews 
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image.
-A well written monostich
with a good topic and imagery.
-I like the personification of
dawn and the description of
how it paints the sky.
-A good entry; good luck!

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    Thanks so much, Pam! :)
reply by Pam (respa) on 28-Jul-2020
    You are welcome.
Comment from Pantygynt
Excellent
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It is hard to say anything meaningful in a poetic way when you have only one line allowed to accomplish it but this is a very creditable effort in which the word choice makes us pause for thought.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2020

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2020
    Thanks so much, Jim! :)