Soulful Refrain
For there, peace simply is...22 total reviews
Comment from angel123
I like your artwork choice that speak volumes about your message of melody being found in the peacefulness of everyday living. I enjoyed reading your profound poem. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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I like your artwork choice that speak volumes about your message of melody being found in the peacefulness of everyday living. I enjoyed reading your profound poem. Best wishes!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Wow - such a wonderful 'shiny star' to wake up to this morning! ;) Thanx so much for your awesome review and bright stars, my lady -- be sure to drop in again sometime! ;) Take care of you and have a Terrific Tuesday! ;) Yvette
Comment from lightink
First of all, I admire the title...it's captivating and made me curious.
The simple wisdom of the poem is charming. "Delightful monotony' - is a memorable word coupling and rather thought provoking.
The presentation is beautiful, as well.
Good luck at the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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First of all, I admire the title...it's captivating and made me curious.
The simple wisdom of the poem is charming. "Delightful monotony' - is a memorable word coupling and rather thought provoking.
The presentation is beautiful, as well.
Good luck at the contest!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Thank you so very much for this wonderful and thoughtful review!!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
If we do as Eckhart Tolle suggests, enjoy the moment we will find our life's melody. There is a book called Surfing the Himalayas that says, "chop wood, carry water before enlightenment; chop wood, carry water after enlightenment. I like how you expressed your poem. Thank you.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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If we do as Eckhart Tolle suggests, enjoy the moment we will find our life's melody. There is a book called Surfing the Himalayas that says, "chop wood, carry water before enlightenment; chop wood, carry water after enlightenment. I like how you expressed your poem. Thank you.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Thank you so very much!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the 25 Syllable Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that facilitates flow. Beautiful presentation.
I like the topic, familiar monotony becomes comfortable and joyful. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the 25 Syllable Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines that facilitates flow. Beautiful presentation.
I like the topic, familiar monotony becomes comfortable and joyful. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Thank you so very much!!
Comment from jaded831
You found beauty in just living, we all should live just appreciating what we have. Outside our little cocoon life can be crazy this day and age. People fighting, storms destroying lives, the virus. Monotone life feels good.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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You found beauty in just living, we all should live just appreciating what we have. Outside our little cocoon life can be crazy this day and age. People fighting, storms destroying lives, the virus. Monotone life feels good.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2020
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Oh, it so definitely does, yeah?! ;) Thanx so much for your awesome review and bright stars, my lady -- be sure to drop in again sometime! ;) Take care of you and have a Terrific Tuesday! ;) Yvette
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I often wonder how poets come up with their poetry. This contest is an eye opener. I see that the brain power of a poet is quite amazing. Well done!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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I often wonder how poets come up with their poetry. This contest is an eye opener. I see that the brain power of a poet is quite amazing. Well done!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much!!
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You're welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
I like it! I am one who prefers the " monotony of daily grace " and compared to all the suddenly life changes that can occur, monotony is a blessing and we can be grateful and take delight in it! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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I like it! I am one who prefers the " monotony of daily grace " and compared to all the suddenly life changes that can occur, monotony is a blessing and we can be grateful and take delight in it! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your review.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
What a lovely sentiment that speaks volumes. The everyday moments - the small wonders - those are the things that make life meaningful.
Beautifully rendered.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer,
What a lovely sentiment that speaks volumes. The everyday moments - the small wonders - those are the things that make life meaningful.
Beautifully rendered.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 16-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2020
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Many thanks, Beautiful Lady!
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-five-syllable poem, Soulful Refrain, has the proper syllable count and acknowledges the simplicity of life's joyful moments.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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This twenty-five-syllable poem, Soulful Refrain, has the proper syllable count and acknowledges the simplicity of life's joyful moments.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for your review.
Comment from Jacob David Collins
I liked the message behind this piece. Everyone is always so keen for time to move forward or to be successful and they seem to forget that pleasure can be found in the simpler things in life. A well written piece. I enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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I liked the message behind this piece. Everyone is always so keen for time to move forward or to be successful and they seem to forget that pleasure can be found in the simpler things in life. A well written piece. I enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2020
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Thanks so very much for these wonderful comments... these days it's best to find joy in the routine, yeah? So glad you enjoyed...