Comment from Brian Michael ferris

Average

I like the words you used in this poem, it's interesting how you put your on twist on some words, this almost seems like so.ethi g I would have written, I like it

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022

Thanx

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

It helps to be old
Does anyone get this one?
playinaround Yes I got your rumor about getting old,
I know that I'm old, but one thing I don't like to do
is not nag my hubby. Yes, at times I find things can be creepy. guess that is a part of aging.
Gert

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2021

Haha. So true

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

well, I think you (he) married someone his parents wanted him to, but he didn't want to.
I'm not sure about the last line, whether he's gunnin' for game or for ma.
But I love your writing - sounds Irish to me -the "ha" bit. But Ma and Pappy doesn't. At any rate I enjoyed it.
Hope you'll tell me if I got it right or not.
Katharine - pome lover

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020

Thank you so much. I be gunnin. Ma be runnin. Ma nags too much so he?s after her. Haha. I?m really glad to get your review😊

reply by pome lover on 07-Oct-2020

ah, thanks for clearing that up. Don't guess there's any such thing as half right. ha.
Katharine - pome lover

Comment from L. Kalere

Excellent

Well, I've got a smile on my face. Wonderful use of the vernacular of a rural or poor area. Great sense of humor and very creative. Congratulations.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2020

Thank you soooo much!!!