General Poetry posted April 2, 2025


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A poem

Breezy Spring Day

by patcelaw

 
Kites seen flying high
with kids in control of strings,
on breezy spring day
little girls flying their kites,
as mom and dad watch them play,
while their kites fly high.




This was the first time that I had ever flown a kite. It was with my three daughters when they were in elementary school. We went out to the playground of the school to fly the kites and we had a very good time. Their daddy had bought them kites and had helped them put them together. It was a fun day for all of us.
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