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Breezy Spring Day

A poem

14 total reviews 
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Patricia,

This was a beautiful poem. Flying kites is a neat thing to do. I used to fly them with the boys and we had a good also. All kids should fly a kite once in their lifetime.

Well done my friend

Cecilia

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    I finally got to fly a kite after I had had four children and I had three girls in elementary school when I did that. I had given up a son for adoption earlier and did not know where he was but had he been with me up, sure we would've been flying kites with him as well.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 02-Apr-2025
    Every parent needs to fly a kite with their kids.
Comment from Mistydawn
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What a sweet memory. Thank you for sharing it with us. Your poem is well-written, very descriptive. I could picture the kites flying in my mind. Your picture is lovely. Great job.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thank you so much for your prayers and review is much appreciated
Comment from RJ Heritage
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I remember my kite flying as a kid. Your poem is very relatable and of special memories. My uncle and older brothers taught me to make kites. I especially loved making and flying thevtyoe called "Mad bull. Nicely done.
RJ

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thank you for stopping by reading my work and leaving a nice review.
reply by RJ Heritage on 02-Apr-2025
    You're welcome
    RJ
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Breezy Spring Day, brings the kites out for the legendary spring breezes which are best for keeping the kites off the ground and forever in our hearts.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    I am thankful when I get nice reviews like this it means a lot.
Comment from Carol Clark2
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Flying kites is great fun for kids, if they're able to get them launched. But that's what dads are for! LOL! Cute poem. Children would like the simplicity of your poem. It tells a fun little story. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    I always get excited when I see a review from you because you are so kind
reply by Carol Clark2 on 02-Apr-2025
    Aww, thanks. I added some notes to the review yesterday on your Prince story. Hope that helps you. I just tacked them onto the original review. It's hard to write when you can't see!
Comment from jim vecchio
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I flew kites once with some friends, but none of us did very well. You and "Mary Poppins" sure make it look and sound like fun. Thanks also for another great illustration.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thank you for stopping by reading my work and leaving such
Comment from Teri7
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I bet your daughters had a really happy and fun time flying their kites. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery from the artwork you chose. love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    With gratitude in my heart, I wish to thank you
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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That sounds like a fun day and a wonderful memory to keep. I actually don't remember ever flying a kite. I've watched them being flown but never done it myself. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Your reviews are always special thank you so much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Flying a kite is not as easy as it looks and I once saw a grown man trying to get a kite into the air with no success! But here in your poem we see three kites take flight, I enjoyed your uplifting post Patricia, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thank you for this beautiful review. It's very touch.
Comment from Janet Foor
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A lovely story and memory of a breezy spring day. My kids loved to fly kites too but I was never very good at it.
I enjoyed reading this uplifting story.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thank you for stopping by reading this work and leaving a