Breezy Spring Day
A poem14 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Patricia,
This was a beautiful poem. Flying kites is a neat thing to do. I used to fly them with the boys and we had a good also. All kids should fly a kite once in their lifetime.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Patricia,
This was a beautiful poem. Flying kites is a neat thing to do. I used to fly them with the boys and we had a good also. All kids should fly a kite once in their lifetime.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I finally got to fly a kite after I had had four children and I had three girls in elementary school when I did that. I had given up a son for adoption earlier and did not know where he was but had he been with me up, sure we would've been flying kites with him as well.
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Every parent needs to fly a kite with their kids.
Comment from Mistydawn
What a sweet memory. Thank you for sharing it with us. Your poem is well-written, very descriptive. I could picture the kites flying in my mind. Your picture is lovely. Great job.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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What a sweet memory. Thank you for sharing it with us. Your poem is well-written, very descriptive. I could picture the kites flying in my mind. Your picture is lovely. Great job.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much for your prayers and review is much appreciated
Comment from RJ Heritage
I remember my kite flying as a kid. Your poem is very relatable and of special memories. My uncle and older brothers taught me to make kites. I especially loved making and flying thevtyoe called "Mad bull. Nicely done.
RJ
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I remember my kite flying as a kid. Your poem is very relatable and of special memories. My uncle and older brothers taught me to make kites. I especially loved making and flying thevtyoe called "Mad bull. Nicely done.
RJ
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for stopping by reading my work and leaving a nice review.
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Breezy Spring Day, brings the kites out for the legendary spring breezes which are best for keeping the kites off the ground and forever in our hearts.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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This poem, Breezy Spring Day, brings the kites out for the legendary spring breezes which are best for keeping the kites off the ground and forever in our hearts.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I am thankful when I get nice reviews like this it means a lot.
Comment from Carol Clark2
Flying kites is great fun for kids, if they're able to get them launched. But that's what dads are for! LOL! Cute poem. Children would like the simplicity of your poem. It tells a fun little story. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Flying kites is great fun for kids, if they're able to get them launched. But that's what dads are for! LOL! Cute poem. Children would like the simplicity of your poem. It tells a fun little story. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I always get excited when I see a review from you because you are so kind
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Aww, thanks. I added some notes to the review yesterday on your Prince story. Hope that helps you. I just tacked them onto the original review. It's hard to write when you can't see!
Comment from jim vecchio
I flew kites once with some friends, but none of us did very well. You and "Mary Poppins" sure make it look and sound like fun. Thanks also for another great illustration.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I flew kites once with some friends, but none of us did very well. You and "Mary Poppins" sure make it look and sound like fun. Thanks also for another great illustration.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for stopping by reading my work and leaving such
Comment from Teri7
I bet your daughters had a really happy and fun time flying their kites. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery from the artwork you chose. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I bet your daughters had a really happy and fun time flying their kites. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery from the artwork you chose. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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With gratitude in my heart, I wish to thank you
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
That sounds like a fun day and a wonderful memory to keep. I actually don't remember ever flying a kite. I've watched them being flown but never done it myself. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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That sounds like a fun day and a wonderful memory to keep. I actually don't remember ever flying a kite. I've watched them being flown but never done it myself. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Your reviews are always special thank you so much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Flying a kite is not as easy as it looks and I once saw a grown man trying to get a kite into the air with no success! But here in your poem we see three kites take flight, I enjoyed your uplifting post Patricia, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Flying a kite is not as easy as it looks and I once saw a grown man trying to get a kite into the air with no success! But here in your poem we see three kites take flight, I enjoyed your uplifting post Patricia, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for this beautiful review. It's very touch.
Comment from Janet Foor
A lovely story and memory of a breezy spring day. My kids loved to fly kites too but I was never very good at it.
I enjoyed reading this uplifting story.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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A lovely story and memory of a breezy spring day. My kids loved to fly kites too but I was never very good at it.
I enjoyed reading this uplifting story.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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