Winter Dessert
How the ground looks when the snow falls.3 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is a good start for a 369 poem for the contest however, the rules say that you must have three stanzas of 369 each so go back and change it so would you be eligible for the contes.
Have a very good weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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This is a good start for a 369 poem for the contest however, the rules say that you must have three stanzas of 369 each so go back and change it so would you be eligible for the contes.
Have a very good weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thanks for the feedback. I added two more stanzas. Have a great week!
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I went back and read it and now you make me hungry for something sweet on a nice school day.
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Thanks! Yeah, I need to make some gingerbread now!
Comment from lyenochka
Your single 3-6-9 verse makes a wonderful metaphor of sugar-sprinkled gingerbread for how the early winter scene looks. For the contest, you need two more stanzas or it will be disqualified.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Your single 3-6-9 verse makes a wonderful metaphor of sugar-sprinkled gingerbread for how the early winter scene looks. For the contest, you need two more stanzas or it will be disqualified.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thanks so much for letting me know. I went back and added two more stanzas. I appreciate you!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Oh I love gingerbread! I think part of the reason is how it looks with the powered sugar dusted all over it like the ground under a fresh snow fall. I do need to mention that I think you need to add to your poem to meet the guidelines for the contest. You need to have three stanzas of 3-6-9 each. I know this because I did the exact same thing when I entered lol , just add 2 more stanzas and you're good to go. thanks for sharing and good luck
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Oh I love gingerbread! I think part of the reason is how it looks with the powered sugar dusted all over it like the ground under a fresh snow fall. I do need to mention that I think you need to add to your poem to meet the guidelines for the contest. You need to have three stanzas of 3-6-9 each. I know this because I did the exact same thing when I entered lol , just add 2 more stanzas and you're good to go. thanks for sharing and good luck
Comment Written 15-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
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Thank for that! I need to read the rules more carefully! I went back and added two more stanzas. Thanks again!
