General Poetry posted November 30, 2020


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Heaven Is Broken

by John Cole

Heaven is broken
Torn apart
The dimension of God
Decayed from war
Flames burned down heaven's door
Thunder rolls
As the angels cast down
Fire in the sky
Violent clouds swirl
Look up and cry!
Humanity dies
Humans
Collateral damage
We scavenge
For God
Killing one another
Heaven rots
Paradise lost
Tears from the saints
Fall to a scorched earth
Savage since birth
As above
So below
Blow for blow
We fight
Celestial might
Illusion of peace
Human spite
Earth
Raped and plundered
God's blunder
Made in his likeness and image
The battle will rage
Trapped in our cage
Of human existence
Walking in ignorance
Rigorous torment
We aren't sent to hell
It wouldn't be fair
Look around you
We're already there



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My observations of these strange times we are living. I used a lot of symbolism here. I truly donĂ¢??t believe Heaven is actually broken.
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