Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted December 18, 2020 Chapters:  ...63 64 -65- 66... 


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Smoothing Out Jagged Edges
A chapter in the book Me and You - 40+ years of Poems V2

Life's Rolling River

by QC Poet

Life flows like those rolling winding untamed Rivers,
We're not the only ones sitting in it's streams who feel their coldest Shivers,
Does yours flow trickling or is it running rushing and Contentious?
Streaming smoothly calmly easing and not in any way a bit Pretentious?

The river's rocky unknown flow that's in this Earthly Life,
Is compounded mostly by the weight of our own Strife!
People and events will then add to quicken its Pace,
Until our balance just gets way out of its Place!

In changing streams of emotions our World spins and Turns,
Sentimental waves will flow through freezing us till it Burns,
Swim
 in the calm streams where Hope and Faith together Yearns,
Let
 Life's stumbling jagged rocks roll breaking off sharp edges as it Churns.

We learn to swim safely and strive to reach our predestined Shore!
Wadding through waters we've made much rougher than ever Before,
Challenges can push us off course to drown out in deep Blue Seas,
Remember, Prayers to our Lord Jesus Christ for Forgiveness calms All of These!





Life's Rolling River
12/16/2020
By; George Martinez
(A.K.A) QC Poet / Chochee Medina
Smoothing Out Jagged Edges

Note;
Photo taken near Trail Canyon Falls in Sunland-Tujunga, California.

I began writing and rolling with a rough Life issue thought stream on 9/20/2020 but as usual - I thought it needed a little more time in the rough poetry sea to help smooth it out.
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