General Poetry posted March 17, 2021

Iza Deleanu

My name is Iza Deleanu, and I currently live in Edmonton, where words are my joyful escape. Originally from Romania, I have published poetry in anthologies as well as short stories under the pen name Izabela Barzoaga. In 2009 I moved to Canada, and - more...

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The sipping sip

by Iza Deleanu

I took a sip.
From magic drink
And felt a spell.
Pang of despair

And lost my mind
And lost my flair.

I took a sip
And drown deep.
In the unknown

It was a sip
And now I slip
I am unborn

The sip was spiked.
I lost my pride
My humankind
Gave me the drink
And with that sip
I lost myself

I damn the drink
That let me slip
And with that sip
I am on my own

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Write a poem. You (or your character) take a sip of a drink and feel different. What happens?

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The sipping sip

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